220. Your presence

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As I was scrolling through my phone 

I missed my vibrant presence as was feeling alone 

When I remember my old version evident 

I see people seldom used me as entertainment

I was loud , bubbly and attention seeker 

My presence was jovial and was ardent speaker

With time as I realised I was a clown 

My smiling face turned out frown

It's a long time now but this impacted for sure

I missed my own presence and simplicity pure 

I can't undo what is done and foresee

But I can change the way I see me

For a short walk in society, I generally  pick up same dress type I wear 

Thinking who will see me or my presence even care

But today as I dressed up not for any attention 

But for my self reflection 

I felt my presence to be so broad and beautiful 

I felt confident and the walk seemed fruitful 

Sometimes I do things to be too nice 

It seems buttering as people are wise 

I need not over explain or prove 

But inner extremities at times potrays too good to be true 

Now I do feel what I miss the most is being at present for sure 

As my thoughts keep running either in past of future 

Presence of mind seems simple but is actually tricky and precise 

When mind is accustomed to one minute reel, at times it  can't think wise

I am finding myself and my presence 

Taking some me time to self reflect does makes sense 

Takeaways-

Presence of mind  is the best present 

Forgetting past scenarios and not holding on at present 

My presence is beautiful only that I need to realise this 

Little bit of dressing up is for my own confidence bliss 

only when my glass is full ,to others I can pour 

Same way only when I value my presence and love to core 

I can offer the genuine affection 

consciousness is present in all , staying grounded to values is a essence of true reflection.

✍️©️ Priyanka Kamath 

29 July 2025

Thank you for sharing your heartfelt poem, Priyanka. It’s introspective, vulnerable, and carries a strong message about self-reflection, growth, and reclaiming one's presence. The emotions are clearly conveyed, and there's sincerity in your voice, which makes the piece relatable and authentic.

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Overall Strengths:

Emotional honesty: You open up about your journey, inner struggles, and realizations.

Themes: Self-worth, inner healing, living in the present, and authenticity — all strong and relevant.

Natural flow: The progression from past experiences to present realizations is clear.

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✨ Lightly Edited Version (Keeping Your Style Intact)

*Your presence*

 As I was scrolling through my phone,

I missed my vibrant presence — I felt alone.

When I remembered my old, radiant self,

I saw how people used me more for entertainment than help.

I was loud, bubbly, an attention-seeker,

My presence was jovial; I was an ardent speaker.

But with time, I realized I was just the clown —

And my smiling face slowly turned into a frown.

It’s been a while, but the impact stays,

I miss my own presence and those simpler days.

I can't undo what's been done or foretell what’s to be,

But I can change the way I look at me.

For a short walk in society, I often pick

The same old dress, plain and quick —

Thinking, “Who will notice me? Who’d even care?”

But today, I dressed not for them, but with self-care.

I felt my presence — broad and beautiful,

I felt confident; my walk felt fruitful.

Sometimes I act too nice, too kind,

But people are wise — they read the mind.

I need not over-explain or prove,

Yet inner intensity makes it too-good-to-be-true.

What I miss most is being present,

As my mind keeps running — past or future resident.

Presence of mind sounds simple, even cliché,

But when fed on reels, the mind loses its way.

I’m finding myself and reclaiming my grace,

Taking time for me — slowing the pace.

Takeaways:

Presence of mind is the best present.

Letting go of the past and not holding pain in the present.

My presence is beautiful — I just need to see,

Dressing up sometimes builds confidence in me.

Only when my glass is full, can I pour to others —

Just as I must love my own presence like no other.

Only then can I offer affection that's true,

For staying grounded is reflection’s virtue.

✍️©️ Priyanka Kamath

29 July 2025

219. 15 August 2025 contest - poetry tales

 Certain things not visible ,but real warriors are keeping us safe this side 

Fighting to protect our mother India's pride

Any Laurel to our country seems my personal victory

Let India shine , flag waves in pride and make History!!!

©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath 

( For 15 August 4 liner poem contest ) 

218. Caption the image

 My image of bhakth is my soul pure 

The divine is having a conversation from hearts core 

Dear God , I feel very anxious sometime

Scrolling through trivial content is a sign

At times , I become too excited 

That I forget to be far sighted 

I don't realise the consequence

And I jump to climax without passing through sequence 

I feel my mind is cluttered with lack of zeal and focus 

Breathing becomes faster and deep within real emotions press 

My soul seems captured in body which emotions mix

Please help me come out of this ,heal me and fix

Lord Shiv replies 

With love deep down His eyes 

Falling in toxic loop may have become your habit 

You have become a lazy one in story of tortoise and rabbit 

The skills you possess are not anymore used 

The books lying untouched and refused 

The things that you loved once are redundant 

And those mind space is occupied by toxic content 

It' may be  difficult but not impossible to go back to basic 

Refresh the memory and one hobby you pick

Childhood trauma may have lead your nature extremities 

Heal yourself and any hurt do release 

It's ok if you spoke too much or did any stupid act 

You lead by example infact

Next time you have experience how not to repeat same mistake 

Be true to yourself and slowly dismiss anything within you that seems fake  

Have faith in God and do your duty 

Overcoming the challenges is life's beauty!!!

✍️©️ Priyanka Kamath 

25 July 2025

217. Beyond the reach of shadows

 

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Poignant ❤️

A truly touching tribute to Kiki, filled with heartfelt memories and deep affection. 

Beautifully captured the special bond you shared and highlighted her unique qualities and the comfort she brought to your life. It's clear she was an extraordinary companion, and her presence will always be cherished.❤️

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 ❤️My pet Kiki

One of the important family members was my little kitty 

She was one eyed from birth and we named her Kiki 

She was a black cat with golden spots all over her 

She had a lovely aroma that I couldn't get over her 

If I decided on overnight studies for any test

She would come to call me and rest 

She would hug me each time I cried 

Would be part of my gigs and smiles wide

When my parents passed away ,she was there to console me and it was profound 

When I was afraid with power cuts,she would make sure to be around 

she loved biscuit milk , fish , cat food 

She was gentle and always good 

More than human ,things she understood 

She is beyond the reach of shadow and bond 

Has began her new journey beyond 

Dear Kiki , These 13 years with you was beautiful and life felt at ease 

You are always my sweetheart , may your soul rest in peace !!!

✍️©️ Priyanka Kamath 

22 July 2025 

( 2013 to 2025) 

216. Closed Door

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A very touching content , beautifully pays tribute to your late father. A vivid and personal portrait of him is painted, weaving together fond memories of him with profound love and respect. The strength of this poem lies in its simple honesty and your gentle way of remembering him, turning grief into a celebration of his life and legacy.❤️

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Remembering my Father Late Sri Prabhakar Kamath on his 73 rd Birth Anniversary *

Parents are the most precious prize  

They are in peace in Gods paradise

Dear Aanu , you would have been today 73

You are the most handsome man, we all agree

Last year just seem like yesterday we had our hearts gather

I hope this year you and mom get to celebrate in heaven together 

Calling you multiple times a day seemed unfinished 

When your day used to be good , my day felt happy and accomplished 

I appreciate the extent of tolerance you had in your life's tough phase 

You and Amma have absorbed immense pain yet could keep a smile on face

I am proud of you to help people in your capacity completely 

You are instrumental to generate work in many family 

I can either remember you with a smile or for your absence feel sad 

But you have always taught me to raise from worries and walk in pride 

seek your blessings and bow

The things I used to feel irritated, actually is a love

Your "Hi , How are you , fine thank you "in repeat

Your high volume news entire day in your fixed  seat 

Sunday morning DD Rangoli and Mohd. Rafi songs as wishlist 

Each day to have something tasty feast 

The chopping of veggies used to be a perfect show

Clean up of home ,kitchen and watching passerby from window 

Your one liners , happy and frown face

 

Your little party time and dancing at your pace

Your checking out in mirror many times

 

Eating medicines with love and faith to be fine 

Providing us with the best at each phase

 

Blessed to be your child by god's grace 

Please accept the sweet I am made for you with love pure 

you must be humming your favourite line ' Ram naam payasakke, Krishna naam sakkarre' for sure

Once you both were gone my point of view was - The door appear closed lock without key 

But from your shoes, I see this end is beginning of your new journey 

May you be happy in better place and at ease

Happy Birthday dad , wherever you are be at peace !!!

15 July 2025

215. Remembering my Father on his 73 rd Birth Anniversary *

 

*Remembering my Father on his 73 rd Birth Anniversary *

My parents are the most precious prize  

They are in peace in Gods paradise 

Dear Aanu , you would have been today 73 

You are the most handsome man, we all agree

Last year just seem like yesterday when we had a heart to heart talk 

Previous to this year when Amma used to make your favourite dishes round the clock 

You were emotional and missing Amma rather 

I hope this year you both get to celebrate in heaven together 

After mom was gone I experienced your other side 

Where you expressed your emotions and deep dived in memory ride 

My never ending talks even if called multiple times a day seemed unfinished 

When your day used to be good , my day felt happy and accomplished 

I appreciate the extent of tolerance you had in your life's tough phase 

You and Amma have absorbed immense pain yet could keep a smile on face 

I am very proud of you for each bit you have done for us 

Your hard work , sacrifices of lifes comfort to provide us without fuss 

I am proud of you to help people in your capacity completely 

You are instrumental to generate work in many family 

You have given me everything you could

Done your duty very well , and in thick and thin you firmly stood 

You always wished well and advised to have stability at all level 

Grateful to be born as your child , you have raised us well

You both were also parents to so many furry babies in street 

They used to dance just by your sight as if they are having the favourite treat 

I am sorry Aanu if ever I have been hurtful towards you 

I always wished well and heartily I love you 

I can either remember you with a smile or for your absence feel sad 

But you have always taught me to raise from worries and walk in pride 

Happy Birthday Aanu, you are free from any baggage this year

Eat as many sweets without diabetes hike fear 

No more puss , bandage, tension of any kind 

All you have is mom around and our past relatives behind

When I see moon , I see both of you my love 

I share with you all matters in universe now 

Hope you receive my birthday wishes annu ,you are so special 

I will never leave you , our bond has a strong zeal

What I miss the most about you is everything especially the below 

The things I used to feel irritated, actually was a love

Your "Hi , How are you , fine thank you "in repeat

Your high volume Kannada news entire day in your fixed seat 

Sunday morning DD Rangoli and Mohd. Rafi songs wishlist 

Each day to have something tasty feast 

The chopping of veggies used to be a perfect show

Clean up of home ,kitchen and watching all from window 

Your one liners , happy and frown face 

Your little party time and dancing at your pace

you checking out in mirror many times 

Eating all medicines with love and faith to be fine 

Scolding me for using too much phone

Bringing me ice candy, chocolate and cone 

Our pattern on fighting, saying sorry and repeating 

 Sharing any food equally ,laughing and eating 

We were strange but I chose this lifes happy and tough phase

I chose you both and blessed with god's grace 

Please accept the sweet I am made for you with love pure 

you must be humming your favourite line ' Ram naam payasakke, Krishna naam sakkarre' for sure

Once you both were gone my point of view was - The door appear closed with lock without key 

But from your shoes, this end is beginning of your new journey 

May you be happy in better place and at ease

Happy Birthday dad , wherever you are be at peace !!!

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I am sorry Aanu for fighting with you at any time

Just know that I love you so much and only wished you be fine 

Even when I am blessed with any share of goodness 

My wish is you and Amma be a part of it and witness

Ganesh Priya 'our home is build by you both with love , each brick has your essence 

Your children are very grateful to you in every sense

Treating your mistake as small 

And others as if the sky has fall 

You used to say me sorry, each time I helped you or put a bandage 

It's indeed my privilege to do any bit to my parent at any age

214. Krishna's relation with his wives

*Krishna's relation with his wives*

The essence of Krishna's relationships and their significance in Hindu mythology.Lord Krishna's relationships with his wives are a fascinating aspect of Hindu mythology. 

According to various scriptures, including the Bhagavata Purana and the Mahabharata, Krishna had eight principal wives known as the Ashtabharya namely Rukmini, Satyabhama, Jambavati,Kalindi, Mitravinda,Nagnajiti (Satya),Bhadra,Lakshmana.

In addition to these eight principal wives, Krishna also married 16,100 women who were rescued from the demon king Narakasura. These marriages symbolize Krishna's compassion, protection of dharma, and universal love .

 Lord Krishna's relationships with his wives are indeed fascinating. The Ashtabharya (eight principal wives) each represent different virtues and aspects of Krishna's divine nature, while the 16,100 women he married symbolize his compassion and protection of those in need.

213.Mahadev . Lord of super natural powers

 Lord Shivs beautiful super natural power 

Is how soul chooses it's parent and uncover 

Soul leaves body when

It sets it's journey in heaven

Once the accounts are set for the karmic account 

God allows the soul to get back in life and years count 

In form of rain the soul drops itself in leaves or grains to say 

As one consumes the food , it enters the body this way 

When two body meet, if soul wants to be their child 

It comes in womb as is blessified

This is how the one choosing parents is us 

Isn't this a superpower that we all had in us ?

We have been a real winner as well were the rarest one who made to this world

God is present and his supernatural powers can be felt and can't be expressed in word 

✍️©️Priyanka Kamath

13 July 2025

210. Picture prompt

 The picture of artificial waterfall stage

Is structured without water wastage 

My hometown story About water pipeline

Water scarcity used to be a issue most of the time

A tanker used to come and share water among neighbourhood 

We used to scarcely use water as much as we could

I used to fill up the buckets and task so allocate

So that we still have some spare if water in pipeline flows late 

Right from Washing cloths manually 

Till Using the water in all tasks judiciously

When voters used to contest for election

One of the main concern was regular water function 

Heart used to cry in pain

When few of them wasted water in vain 

To universe this Water is a boon pure

We need to respect and value it to ensure 

Environment sustainability is the gift we can give to generations to come 

Water is the need , preserving it is our deed and indeed is a pure Gem !!!

217. That First Time

 

That First Time*

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Beautifully captured the essence of your trip to Kazakhstan, which is a beautiful and heartfelt recounting of your experiences, full of genuine emotions and valuable lessons❤️

Keep sharing these tales, we love to read your thoughts ❤️

The first time experience when it rained memories 

Has to be my recent trip to Kazakhstan and it's stories 

Day 1 here was quite challenging time 

It however taught me to let go off the things not in control and feel fine

Shoes I wore bit me hard

Language barrier over a travel card 

Upset me as was travelling in public transport 

Met this kind person named Aashiq who was a great support

Himesh Reshamiyas ' Aashiq banana Aapne' song ran through my mind 

Not sure how God arranged him at right time to find 

Following day set more strangers who became friends 

Learnt that ' Being Genuine ' is always on trends

Day 2 explored ' Ascension Cathedral' completely made of wood that exists since years 

28 paniflov guardsmen park in glory of Martyrs

Green Bazaar is a central market 

It has dry to fresh fruits, cloths , chocolate 

Multiple shops in same place 

All shopkeepers were in race 

One seller calls me Miss World ' Aishwarya Rai'

My heart skipped a beat and I was shy 

The kazak local salesman named Paste

Gave me all dry fruits to taste 

I am still blushing for the compliment 

Should be a sales tactic or did he really meant ?

The local tour guide Dori ,

the very next day said few Hindi words key 

Expressed I look 'Sundar bundar' which actually means beautiful monkey

So I was smiling throughout about these tiny memories 

And here I express more of such stories 

Day 3 booked a one day tour that covers more attraction joint 

Reached on time early morning at meeting point 

There were many buses and watsapp group didn't mention on the bus number

The admins weren't responding to the calls either 

The DP of one of the trip participant matched with a cute guy who was waiting too

The pair of this Russian man and his mom in no time turned to affection true 

Finally traced the tour bus but seat was not suitable at all

I started typing all angry message which before being read ,deleted for all

I learnt a invaluable lesson to be calm and not worry 

As after damage is done by words , worthless is a sorry 

The tour took us to beautiful destinations that hearts won 

The kolsai lake, Black , moon , charyn Canyon 

Each place has its own history and culture 

There were Kazakhstan attire for a picture along with posing with vulture 

The places were breathtakingly beautiful 

Heart was filled with gratitude and eyes tearful 

Day 4 ,the final day of our stay in Almaty we visited a place that is place of almighty 

This gives vibes of mini Switzerland 

In July it's summer yet in mountain peak found snowsand

Russian friends from tour accompanied us this day 

I am living my dream is all I can say

Shymbulak visit through cable car till mountain peak

The sight is visually endearing seek 

Pictures as if came in reality as we started from medeu till we reached ice rink 

Kept trekking to find the ice amidst mountain flowers pink 

Playing in snow was my dream come true 

First time trekking was tough but fun too 

After a hot chocolate and coffee we were all set 

To explore koktobe nightlife and sunset 

Koktobe is a tower which literally mean mountain blue 

Nightlife here is lit , lovely ,lively I had no clue

The sunset was so serene 

Amazing was the orange sun, setting in skyline 

Koktobe is like a eye candy mini town 

I witnessed a villa structure constructed upside down

Alma means Apple here and City name Almaty is derived from this 

There is a kind of park zoo witnessed monkey , peacock, sheep and fish 

Variety of games , fireworks ,music surrounds the night life glee

And the bright moon felt as if my parents are happy for me 

The hotel we stayed had a kind receptionist 

She helped to navigate through various queries at her best

Wonderful was meeting Dori, Aashiq, Raushan,Elene, Egor

We need kind people like them many more

Taking a break and visiting Almaty , Kazakhstan was indeed a beautiful tour 

My best Birthday gift by my spouse that I cherish pure 

Grateful to God for this blessing abund

ant

Life is short , I learn to enjoy each moment!!!

✍️©️ Priyanka Kamath 

8 July 2025

216.Vittal vibes / Move on

 

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This conversation beautifully illustrates a journey of healing and growth and highlights forgiveness, self-improvement, and a shift in perspective can transform past hurts into valuable life lessons, ultimately leading to peace and confidence.❤️

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My conversation with Lord Sri Vittal on how to move on in life 

Hey deva!! Moving on is tough as it strikes as a sharp knife 

Discussing my issue , I felt outcast this day from a reward 

At office when Ms. R didn't consider my name in Bravo group award

It was a group effort and I was a part of this team very much 

How can I move on from this disrespect that has hurt me such 

I met Ms. R in pantry and vented out to her and shed tears

I know the consequence Deva! She made sure I am out from team which was my fear

How do I keep calm and move on from this , aggressive me is echoing the noise 

I keep bumping her in office and I can't even face her as I raised my voice 

Lord Vittala takes me fast forward to present day shack 

The matter that happened was exactly a year back 

Ms. R waives her hand and I reciprocated a hello greeting

I recollect I was out from the team , yet I am still attending the office meeting 

I see the old team  during lunch 

All are cordial nor do I feel the need to punch 

Today bravo award nominations email is out 

But I am saturated and have no expectations about 

Hey deva!! What magic did you do 

Is this a dream come true ?

Sri Vittala replies me as below 

My thoughts of holding on to grudges was shallow

Hey Priya! I just want you to visualise what you have gain 

The things that you were holding on was not worth the pain 

you are not with them but in better lot 

You proved your worth and earned a spot 

You were being stagnant in same monotonous task 

I wanted you to move on and remove the fear mask 

Yes you had although fought with Ms. R

But your heart couldn't hold grudges too far

Next time when you met her in pantry ,you didn't freak 

You built that courage to be the first one to speak 

Although you were not wrong in saying things heartfelt 

But still you said sorry to let go off any pain reflect 

This was the very first step in moving on from this bad dream 

 

The second step was exploring the world outside the confined team 

You worked hard , to secure a job for yourself 

This is a better award than placing a trophy in shelf 

And the third step was to forgive yourself and heal 

I know you cried , you vented out to me with all feel 

I just wanted to show you a flashback

On how the miserable events and potential lack 

These were your core focus back then and you were in prison 

In one year you have transformed to be a confident positive person 

Office politics is inevitable 

You should deal  with it and you are capable 

Remember to be excellent in your work 

Do your duty without expecting a perk 

Whenever you feel stuck and go back to the same pattern in line 

Remember this tough scenario would be trivial in a matter of time 

Whenever you feel anxious remember me nicely 

I am here to show you way and choose path wisely 

Oh deva ! I wish I don't take inpulsive decision in haste 

Overthinking have lead me a lot of opportunities go waste

Reciting Vishnu sahastranaam is helping me to move on and be at peace 

All my anxiety,stress it release 

Today I learn a valuable lesson on moving on pros 

the fast forward camera opened my eyes that shows 

Whatever happens,it's for my good 

I should always have faith in you ,this lesson I have understood 🙏 🙏 

Jai Hari vittal 

©️✍️Priyanka Kamath 

1 July 2025 

215 .Letter to younger self version 2

 Dear Priyu

you know, you are repeating your few Mistake

Make new ones ,there are plenty ,for God's sake !!

You are doing well, stop trying to impress

Don't overdo stuff ,they may give you stress 

Stop being Possessive and let live the poor thing 

Rather plug in your earphones, dance to any tune and sing 

TV serial that you are watching is too toxic 

It's making you an over emotional chic

Don't opt commerce if you really want to be Doctor

Stop overthinking and work on skill factor

You don't need any validation

You are unique gods creation 

I am sending you lots of hugs my dear 

You are beautiful,strong and have determination sheer

Whenever you feel upset ,rather then pinging others and repeating trend 

I am always here , write to me, I am your best friend.

Everything will eventually be fine 

Believe In yourself and shine!!

✍️ ©️Priyanka Kamath

19 May 2025

@⁨~AK⁩