129.Mist of veil

 

Mist of veil

A family willing to adopt my little bird 

Based on the goodwill I had 

But the bird doesn't want to be in nest 

Wishing well for her has put me to sickle of test 

Bird doesn't want to adjust in new home

I am guilty of giving family the hope 

The bird wants to roam around free

Doesn't wish to be in shelter of tree

The new family is kind 

I wish a genuinely happy bird they find

My bird is aged but not matured flame 

Consequence ahead for me to be a person to blame 

I wish well for new family as well as bird 

Directly conveying would be absurd 

A step ahead is pit 

Backward door is shut

 I am not sure how to express

Without conveying I am feeling in stress

Covering a mist of veil in form of poem to the reality check

For new family to make themselves requisite background checks

©️ Priyanka Kamath 

17-12-2024

Review 

Superb🔥

The internal conflict is very well depicted giving a new perspective to the given topic. Beautifully expressed the different forms of emotions and ends with a beautiful message🔥

Well-done🔥

Keep it up🔥

@⁨Priyanka Kamath⁩