*Finding answers*
My wandering mind has no tag
As if I am Searching the right bag
Sometimes I go back in past
And wish the memories would last
During Shivaratri my dad used to get panak from temple
I tried to make this in his memory a sample
It didn't turn out well
I wish I learnt mom's dishes beforehand well
I am craving for the panchakajayi she made
The recipe she might have told before , but memories just fade
I generally make so many videos rant
Why don't I have any of my parent?
Why doesnt time heal the pain?
Where is their path lane?
The memories which lead me to joy within
Why do I cry now when Google photos flashes them
I am literally afraid to go back home
Each memories is so special known
I feel very low sometime but God is kind
Diverting my mind is the only solution I find
Oh good God, please help me in finding my fence
Help me Boost my self worth and confidence!!!
Happy Maha Shivaratri 🙏
©️✍️ Priyanka kamath
26/02/2025
Review
It elegantly captures nostalgia and longingness and the bittersweet nature of memories. The personal touch like Shivaratri, panak etc add warmth and depth feeling intimate and relatable. It makes the poem strongly relatable reminding us our own memories. Its tangible and unique poem. Overall a beautiful poem ⭐💫 keep writing and sharing ❤️
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