Review
Poignant❤️
A sweet and imaginative little masterpiece that beautifully portrays the shirt and connects it to a relatable story about finding value beyond perfection or a perceived flaw. Its central metaphor, where a stain leads to a deeper connection and a new, more beloved role, is very clear. ❤️
Keep writing and exploring these unique perspectives
❤️*Value beyond the stain*
I am white shirt in Priyanka's wardrobe lying idle
If not highly maintained ,I will look dull
I am cotton and will shrink hence need ironing
Lazy Priyanka wouldnt make pre preps and on office day while running late
Would pull out low maintainance blouses and untouched would be my fate
Once I asked her out for a date
And silly girl dropped mango juice on me as she ate
She cried , bathed me , brushed me with toothpaste
As my yellow teeth was now prominent
I am her daily wear now still her favourite
My place was earlier in office wear organiser bin
Other shirts used to stare me with grin
When Priyanka did this blunder ,I thought I lost my value
But now atleast she thinks me as her dear love
I used to feel so lonely lying alone with zero score
Now after a stain , my value is infact more
She sees me beyond my colour now
I am her comfort wear and has a role new
Same way situation may not be favourable to us that land
But we can make the best out of what we have on hand !!!
✍️©️ Priyanka Kamath
7 October 2025
@~Vipin V. Kamble
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