Thursday, 9 October 2025

254.Writers canvas/ Value Beyond stain



Review 

Poignant❤️

A sweet and imaginative little masterpiece that beautifully portrays the shirt and connects it to a relatable story about finding value beyond perfection or a perceived flaw. Its central metaphor, where a stain leads to a deeper connection and a new, more beloved role, is very clear. ❤️

Keep writing and exploring these unique perspectives

❤️*Value beyond the stain* 


I am white shirt in Priyanka's wardrobe lying idle 


If not highly maintained ,I will look dull 


I am cotton and will shrink hence need ironing 


Lazy Priyanka wouldnt make pre preps and on office day while running late 


Would pull out low maintainance blouses and untouched would be my fate 


Once I asked her out for a date 


And silly girl dropped mango juice on me as she ate 


She cried , bathed me , brushed me with toothpaste 


As my yellow teeth was now prominent 


I am her daily wear now still her favourite 


My place was earlier in office wear organiser bin 


Other shirts used to stare me with grin 


When Priyanka did this blunder ,I thought I lost my value 


But now atleast she thinks me as her dear love 


I used to feel so lonely lying alone with zero score 


Now after a stain , my value is infact more 


She sees me beyond my colour now 


I am her comfort wear and has a role new 


Same way situation may not be favourable to us that land


But we can make the best out of what we have on hand !!!


✍️©️ Priyanka Kamath 

7 October 2025


@⁨~Vipin V. Kamble⁩ 

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