Sunday, 26 October 2025

262. Trick or treat

 Review 

Profound❤️

A moment of unexpected kindness and the regret of a missed relationship are beautifully juxtaposed. The internal conflict outlined—from initially saying “no,” to quickly offering a gift, and ultimately the anxiety surrounding the meeting—is immediately palpable. The themes of missed opportunities and the innate joy that comes from a small effort are beautifully captured, and are commendable.❤️

Keep writing 

Keep inspiring

 ❤️*Trick or trick*


To my place rarely people visit

First time a little girl came in asking for Halloween trick or treat 

Instantly I said no as I was not ready 

The girl was going her way steady 

As she was going I gave her a chocolate 

She was already leaving so I grabbed one before getting late

I remembered I had few more 

I searched her even more 

But I couldn't find this sweetie anyway

Seated in reception I kept waiting to see if she passes by 

Little laxmi came my home for first time 

I didn't have anything much to give his sunshine 

Opportunity knocks door only once may be 

I would love to see again this cute baby 

I am happy atleast I could give her one treat rather than deny 

Hadn't I given  that, my regret would multiply

Still was feeling anxious so I came to sit in open air 

My heart which is easily hurt and overthinks needs care

I checked with security guard too 

She was found nowhere in camera was she even true ?


©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath 

24 Oct 2025

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262. Trick or treat

 Review  Profound❤️ A moment of unexpected kindness and the regret of a missed relationship are beautifully juxtaposed. The internal conflic...