Review
Profound❤️
A moment of unexpected kindness and the regret of a missed relationship are beautifully juxtaposed. The internal conflict outlined—from initially saying “no,” to quickly offering a gift, and ultimately the anxiety surrounding the meeting—is immediately palpable. The themes of missed opportunities and the innate joy that comes from a small effort are beautifully captured, and are commendable.❤️
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❤️*Trick or trick*
To my place rarely people visit
First time a little girl came in asking for Halloween trick or treat
Instantly I said no as I was not ready
The girl was going her way steady
As she was going I gave her a chocolate
She was already leaving so I grabbed one before getting late
I remembered I had few more
I searched her even more
But I couldn't find this sweetie anyway
Seated in reception I kept waiting to see if she passes by
Little laxmi came my home for first time
I didn't have anything much to give his sunshine
Opportunity knocks door only once may be
I would love to see again this cute baby
I am happy atleast I could give her one treat rather than deny
Hadn't I given that, my regret would multiply
Still was feeling anxious so I came to sit in open air
My heart which is easily hurt and overthinks needs care
I checked with security guard too
She was found nowhere in camera was she even true ?
©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath
24 Oct 2025
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