Friday, 15 November 2024

Favourite topic -My Trip to Malaysia*

 


*Favourite Topic - My Trip to Malaysia*


Malaysia had been in our bucket list keen


The country is beautiful and clean 


Between Penang and Kuala Lumpur we divided our stay


To make it fruitful each day 


Georgetown Penang is well known for its street Art


We did a walking tour of this cultural part


Street art has a different story to shine 


In multiple poses, I could narrate one each time


Passing through Little India, China town and Food street 


Clan of Jetties ,temple here is a visual retreat


Walking through Top of Penang tower beam


Beneath a glass counter is a sky walk theme


Sky Bridge is a outdoor building walk


We get to see Penang city to unlock 


Rainbow walk podium had 4 things to check 


There is a swing of Luck 


A message to manifest and tuck


Top open space for sky walk 


A bell to ring believed to wish lock 


Observatory Deck was near to Sky walk space 


To observe the view indoor at our pace 


Aquarium was filled with variety of marine life pool


The environment was calm and cool


Jurassic park had 2 variations centre


One is research and other one is a live park to enter 


The dinosaur is structured in such a way


As if it is moving and has something to say 


I realise a lot of effort goes into this formation 


Major role of technology and innovation 


There were many Wax Statues as we passed by these gem


They posed with me as if I was special to them 


Mirror never lies but it's just a praise


I saw myself in different forms in Mirror maze


Exploring night market was such a fun drive 


Witnessing fireworks with cool breeze and waves that arrive


I am mesmerized by the impact of seeing beach 


It deep drives and to my soul it reach 


We tried different Malaysian food


First two days we felt it was good 


Tried Nasi lemak ,char kuey teow


Mee curry to name a few 


Public transport is good to carry 


Travelled through bus ,train and ferry 


Batu cave is breathtakingly beautiful call


Was in tears as soon as I spotted Lord Hanuman idol


Lord Murugans calm smile


As if he heard everything standing from a mile


The day we visited, it rained a bit


Peacock dance was a lit


I was eager to capture picture with monkey alone


He was keen on grabbing my phone 


My heart skipped a beat in a row


As monkey raised his eye brows 


Petronas Twin Tower is a tourist attraction core 


With lighting it looked so beautiful much more 


Seremban is a small city 


Explored to get some candy and things petty 


A week long trip was good by god's grace 


To visit as a couple to this country and place 


Understanding different culture and heritage 


And to embrace the moment and let myself free from any baggage 


People were helpful and kind 

Malaysia is indeed a unwinding find!!!


©️ Priyanka kamath

15-11-2024


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A beautiful account of a delightful Malaysian adventure, full of cultural immersion, breathtaking fun and delicious food.❤️

Thursday, 31 October 2024

121.CKS Feedback

*CKS Feedback*


CKS writing platform is an emotional feel


I pour out my heart through poems and heal


Didi's feedback is so precious and deep


Sensitivity and creative with love in heap


Certificate and your surprises loop


motivates me to keep writing and take a leap 


Platforms Consistency and sincere efforts is the key here 


I can express my thoughts without any fear


I am blessed to be part of this ever since 


It has brought in me a lot of confidence 


This community is now more than a family 


I thank the team for the efforts done joyfully 


May you prosper and more lourels to come


Happy anniversary,you are awesome !!!


©️✍️ Priyanka kamath

31/10/2024

Tuesday, 29 October 2024

120. Dil wali Diwali

 



Dil waali Diwali 🪔 Anthology


Festival like Diwali was a wishful call


Helping mom with delicacy and distribute to all


Lighting diyas, cleaning home, wishing relatives and friend


May continue now too but those days had a different trend 


The most special thing was it was done with heart 


And festive season connected two ppl miles apart 


Peple used to visit houses to give handmade sweet 


Slowly it turned to store bought treat

I was accepting all the changing phases of festival season


However 'Dil'is missing in Diwali for the the below reason


Back in mangalore my parents stay in a society lane


Last year losing my mom was such a pain


Dad was doing ok as he has health issues odd


And I was looking for a help to stay with him as I stay abroad 


His health conditions wouldn't allow him to travel


And I was just waiting for my arrival 


My dad had his food arranged deal


He felt weak but missed his meal


He fell near gate and hurt his bone


And some road labourer helped him get home 


He called my bro who stays a bit far


I m glad he came on right time to attend dad's scar


As soon as he arrives at night 


my neighbour Nayana sees this and switchs off doors and light 


Due to body pain dad couldn't walk 


Although bro had kept water nearby he couldn't take


Dad calls me and said that he is thirsty and needs water


I called my neighbours for help as a human and not merely as a daughter 


Mrs. Lobo says she is going for mass so can't attend 


My other neighbour Mrs.Mallya who otherwise used to sweets send


Says that to give water noone will come

 

Other neighbour Kini said he is at work and treated me as if I am troublesome 


Dad's so called friend and relatives  who came to each of our family function

 

To relish the food, get gossips but none were there to share my concern 


Mrs.Lobo then sends her house help to give dad water 


And then calls me over phone later 


Mentions that for the favour that she has given broad 


She wants me to repay it by giving her nephew a job abroad


Sometimes I feel ppl are less human as technology pace doubles


As noone wants to take any unnecessary troubles


Real help is to be selfless and be kind towards someone in need 


This is what develops in good  karmic seed


Wishing a blissful festival and Pouring my heart with you all


I believe god is holding my hands and will never let me fall


Thankfully a good arrangement for dad is made at place


Only prayers for this Diwali is for him to heal by God's grace !!


©️✍️Priyanka Kamath

29-10-2024


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Awesomely awesome🔥

Your heart-warming words paint a beautiful picture of the transformation of Diwali, highlighting how it was once a festival of warmth and true bonding, but has now lost some of its essence in the modern world.🔥

Personal experiences highlight the difference between the idealised image of Diwali and the reality of human apathy. Despite the apathy, acts of compassion are also highlighted.Your views on the changing nature of relationships and the impact of technology are insightful. Your prayers for your father's recovery reflect the true spirit of the festival - a time of hope, healing and the triumph of light over darkness.🔥

May your father recover completely, and may Diwali bring you peace, joy and a renewed faith in humanity.🔥

Keep inking 

Keep inspiring 🔥

@⁨Priyanka Kamath⁩


Friday, 25 October 2024

119.Office stories- samosa party smile story*

 


Office stories- samosa party smile story*


Shortly I will be moving to a team new


Today there was a samosa party as a ice breaker to know 


Let me just put a background of my situation very 


Me earlier working under audit , at present in tax and future with advisory 


My future manager had spotted me in tears way back 


When I was having a tough time with audit team pack 


Today when we met he asked in front of all 


That he had seen me crying standing tall 


Immediately everyone focussed on me more


And it was embarrassing to the core


My present manager answered this dent


That it was past ,let's focus on present 


Then the upcoming manager spoke normally with all of us

 

And everyone started back chatting without a fuss 


Yet back of my mind I wanted to give him befitting reply 


But the next few months to be trained at work, I would on him rely


If I give any negative vibe any 


I can have tough time so many


I had female managers before 


And they were kind and listened more 


Now if I take up any issues more


I would be fired from job for sure 


So being positive and learning work net


Doing my best and getting permanent


That's my focus 


Yes I should not cry in office to avoid any buzz.


Anyways coming to my second part of pile 


An issue over a smile 


I smiled to my colleague and to smile back he didn't bother 


I could have been silent but I spoke rather


He said he doesn't know me so he didn't smile sheer


So I said you aren't a hero , I smiled as a gesture as you are peer 


He thought he was handsome that I couldn't resist but smile like this 


Gave befitting reply to avoid wrong impression about this 


Possibly I have a lot of baggage in my heart


Which is making me show naive and emotional part


I know I behave stupid at times 


Yet good part is that I am journaling my feelings in this lines 


Someday when I would look back


I would know if I have forgone this baggage pack 


I am in such phase shatter


That I can cry even for tiny matter 


I know this too shall pass sure


I should believe in myself a little more!!!


©️ ✍️Priyanka Kamath

25-10-2024


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Marvellous 🔥

A poignant moment of vulnerability and resilience is captured beautifully. The candid reflection on the emotional journey from past struggles to current challenges is presented, which is both relatable and inspiring. The contrast between the supportive and understanding current manager and the more indifferent future manager highlighted the complexities of workplace dynamics. The self-awareness of the emotional burden and the determination to overcome, is commendable . Empathy and understanding are portrayed brilliantly with raw honesty and introspective tone.🔥

Beautiful content 🔥

Keep it up 🔥

@⁨Priyanka Kamath⁩

Tuesday, 22 October 2024

118.Connected

 *Connected*



There are 3 connections I see broad


With self , close relations and with God 


Just like how phone charger is a must

 for phone to access seamless list


I realised my connection to life's charger when it was lost 


When I do my yoga, prayers ,meditation..


And work with full dedication ..


I feel happier,content and slay


This is how I charge my day


The moment I lean towards certain situation


And give lesser importance to self connection 


I feel a drain in my energy magic ball


And without charger I exhaust them all


These lifestyle discipline which I refer to charger 


Is to be daily connected to myself here


Just like how the phone gets dead 


I shouldn't let my pure soul shed 


Toxicity, negativity is easily found 


But inner connection with self is a lifelong bond 


With charger if misplaced we should  trace it 


With life our charger finds us but we should embrace it 


I was  recently coping up with some personal issue


Routine changed to crying and wiping off tears with tissue 


But I forgot to charge myself, connect and bond 


As a result I was aimlessly focussing on negativity around 


The moment I gave away my worries to god 


Started daily meditation and disciplined routine bond 


I understood that my response to situation made it worse 


I can overcome each test in life's phase


To overcome each test put by life with grace


Being dutiful and Staying connected to self is the base !!!


©️✍️Priyanka Kamath 

22 October 2024


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Fantastic 🔥

Beautifully compared to a phone charger to illustrate the idea of the need for constant recharging in life. Emphasised the importance of connecting to oneself through practices such as yoga, meditation and mindful work, which is like a lifesaver and helps to deal with personal challenges and overcome negativity. Perfectly described the need for routine to maintain connection and energy. Showed faith in the process by showing dedication and belief in a higher power (God).🔥

Presented a beautiful and insightful reflection on the importance of connection and gave a beautiful message that staying connected to oneself can help us face life’s challenges more easily.🔥

Keep writing 

Keep Inspiring🔥

@⁨Priyanka Kamath⁩


Tuesday, 15 October 2024

117. Housewife

 



Housewife*


Term housewife has evolved over time 

The essence of being a homemaker and outshine 


I wonder if working in corporate would tag me as working lady to core 


Considering I come back home and do my household chore


Just as when I do heavy lifting with all charm

I tend to push my capacity in my arm


After household work queue 

I persue my hobby too


I make sure to write weekly one poem atleast 

It really gives confidence in my fist


In addition when I give myself a chance to persue my studies more

It immensely gives me a life purpose for sure


I am aware if motherhood approaches me 

My life would definitely turn 360 degree


I have seen and felt my mom strive hard for us 

By god's grace ,I am all set to do my duty without fuss!!!


©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath 

15 October 2024


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Wow🔥

An empowering perspective on the diverse roles and contributions of women. Challenging old stereotypes, it shows the strength, resilience and determination that defines the modern housewife. 

Beautifully portrays the physical and mental labour involved in household chores, comparing them to "heavy lifting".🔥

Remembering your mother as a housewife and mother, you beautifully admitted that she was the inspiration for your journey🔥

Keep it upt

Thanks for sharing your beautiful thoughts🔥

@⁨Priyanka Kamath⁩

Sunday, 29 September 2024

116.Deep Seated Ache


 *Deep Seated Ache*


One of the loss that took toll on my health 

Was losing hard earned monetary wealth 


I was victim of a scam net 

Revisiting surely makes my eyes wet


I used to fill up lucky draw vouchers in mall

Based on same I receive a call


I along with spouse was asked to come in a hotel hall 

To accept the prize and in trap to fall 


An attractive package for travel was offered bruh!

Something too good to be true


The salesperson was too adamant even to give time to think 

Few lakhs amount was gone in blink 


I was too upset with my spouse for sure 

His intention was to take me to world tour 


Eventually the company turned out to be fraud 

It was like a direct hit to our trust with Rod 


We seeked help with bank,police,legal way

But the company no longer exist and the owner has ran away 


The team was from my hometown 

It hits hard that I got deceived from whom I thought as own


The consequences was too deep

I lost focus on work and sleep


One motivation kept me going 

If fired from job and sitting home hoping 


Would do no good so best was to focus on work

Than crying over split milk and being a jerk 


Even today when I think about this deep seated ache

I feel let this be a nightmare for god's sake


I do believe in karmic account 

If something is written in fate ,it will !without my fault 


Atleast I have a shoulder to cry 

I can work harder to resume the monetary loss and try 


In life relations matter the most 

'Health is wealth' I am grateful utmost 


If money would have got possession every other 

I would definitely get back my Mother 


Her loss I can never compensate 

But life indeed gives each day as a fresh slate


Losses are inevitable at times

Such experience have made me wise!!!


©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath 

29 September 2024


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Poignant🔥

A powerful and moving piece of writing that reflects a heartfelt exploration of loss. The emotional turmoil and financial devastation that comes from being a victim of fraud is beautifully depicted, while also providing valuable insight into the importance of relationships and health. It is a beautiful testament to your ability to overcome adversity and find strength in the face of loss.❤️

Keep writing 

Keep shining 🖋️

@⁨Priyanka Kamath⁩


Favourite topic -My Trip to Malaysia*

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