117. Housewife

 

Housewife*

Term housewife has evolved over time 

The essence of being a homemaker and outshine 

I wonder if working in corporate would tag me as working lady to core 

Considering I come back home and do my household chore

Just as when I do heavy lifting with all charm

I tend to push my capacity in my arm

After household work queue 

I persue my hobby too

I make sure to write weekly one poem atleast 

It really gives confidence in my fist

In addition when I give myself a chance to persue my studies more

It immensely gives me a life purpose for sure

I am aware if motherhood approaches me 

My life would definitely turn 360 degree

I have seen and felt my mom strive hard for us 

By god's grace ,I am all set to do my duty without fuss!!!

©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath 

15 October 2024

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Wow🔥

An empowering perspective on the diverse roles and contributions of women. Challenging old stereotypes, it shows the strength, resilience and determination that defines the modern housewife. 

Beautifully portrays the physical and mental labour involved in household chores, comparing them to "heavy lifting".🔥

Remembering your mother as a housewife and mother, you beautifully admitted that she was the inspiration for your journey🔥

Keep it upt

Thanks for sharing your beautiful thoughts🔥

@⁨Priyanka Kamath⁩

116.Deep Seated Ache

 *Deep Seated Ache*

One of the loss that took toll on my health 

Was losing hard earned monetary wealth 

I was victim of a scam net 

Revisiting surely makes my eyes wet

I used to fill up lucky draw vouchers in mall

Based on same I receive a call

I along with spouse was asked to come in a hotel hall 

To accept the prize and in trap to fall 

An attractive package for travel was offered bruh!

Something too good to be true

The salesperson was too adamant even to give time to think 

Few lakhs amount was gone in blink 

I was too upset with my spouse for sure 

His intention was to take me to world tour 

Eventually the company turned out to be fraud 

It was like a direct hit to our trust with Rod 

We seeked help with bank,police,legal way

But the company no longer exist and the owner has ran away 

The team was from my hometown 

It hits hard that I got deceived from whom I thought as own

The consequences was too deep

I lost focus on work and sleep

One motivation kept me going 

If fired from job and sitting home hoping 

Would do no good so best was to focus on work

Than crying over split milk and being a jerk 

Even today when I think about this deep seated ache

I feel let this be a nightmare for god's sake

I do believe in karmic account 

If something is written in fate ,it will !without my fault 

Atleast I have a shoulder to cry 

I can work harder to resume the monetary loss and try 

In life relations matter the most 

'Health is wealth' I am grateful utmost 

If money would have got possession every other 

I would definitely get back my Mother 

Her loss I can never compensate 

But life indeed gives each day as a fresh slate

Losses are inevitable at times

Such experience have made me wise!!!

©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath 

29 September 2024

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Poignant🔥

A powerful and moving piece of writing that reflects a heartfelt exploration of loss. The emotional turmoil and financial devastation that comes from being a victim of fraud is beautifully depicted, while also providing valuable insight into the importance of relationships and health. It is a beautiful testament to your ability to overcome adversity and find strength in the face of loss.❤️

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@⁨Priyanka Kamath⁩

115.A sip of intoxication

 

A sip of intoxication*

Situation in life can be unfavorable 

Motive to divert mind and be stable 

Mind diversion when leads to incorrect choice

Could give temporary pleasure even in noise 

Feel good harmones triggers with each toxic sip 

Eventually leads to sailing in aimless ship

Happiness string would no more be with us

Lack of focus is a demerit plus 

Coming out from addiction is a challenge 

This can be achieved by lifestyle change 

One of the sips of intoxication I tasted 

Sharing how my time and energy in this is wasted 

My peer who discussed her life gossip 

Over few popcorns and a coffee sip 

Little did I know this would be in line 

List of intoxication sip of mine

When she disturbed in between work and I said I can't

Yet she persuaded me as if I am her agony aunt 

I agree, her breakup can be one of her toughest phase 

But I am not her punching bag in any case

For her I was a sip of intoxication 

To vent out and get some relaxation 

If I was her therapist, I would be a millionaire by now 

I tried to give her all solution and then again she asks why and how 

Coming out of this toxic circle is tough 

Blocking her on my part would be rough 

A lot of drain in energy I feel 

Sip of intoxication now no longer appeal

Coming out of this loop is indeed a challenge 

Each day is a fresh page

I will and I can come out of this cage 

A sip of intoxication is a poky knife 

Such experience is indeed a lesson for life!!!

©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath 

24 September 2024

Review:-

Incredible 🔥

A beautiful, inspiring and thoughtful poem that warns of the dangers of toxic relationships. Its tone is reflective and cautionary, highlighting the potential dangers of allowing others to consume your time and energy. It is divided into several stanzas, each of which explores a different aspect of the subject. The rhythm is smooth and flowing, the message is relevant and timely, and it could serve as a cautionary tale. Good job🔥

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@⁨Priyanka Kamath⁩

114.Tinkling anklets*

 *Tinkling anklets*

Tinkling anklet is a metaphor for my mom's graceful presence

She transformed house into a home with her essence

Tinkling anklets is also my parents home feel

Kitchen chores , distant noises, sound of steel 

Tinkling anklet now defines my nephew nieces playfulness 

Emptiness of losing a parent is filled by these bundle of joy and happiness

Anklet tinkling rhythm is an emotion

Which continues to exist in my lifes portion.

Recently in my office when there was a Global village event fair 

I realised wearing a traditional wear,anklet has become so rare

When something is missed it's valued more 

The essence of tinkling anklet is in my hearts core 

Tinkling anklet is also a metaphor for my inner charm 

Which often covers with trivial stress worm

My poetry earlier was effortless glee

Now I feel something is hindering me

My poem is a reflection of my present thoughts fume

Let my tinkling anklets to make me dance to it's rhythmic tune!!!

©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath

17 September 2024

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Awesome 🔥

The essence of a mother's love and its impact on our lives is beautifully depicted. The metaphor of the tinkling anklets is a clever way to express the grace, joy and comfort she brings. The contrast between the emptiness of losing a parent and the joy of watching your nephews and nieces play is poignant.

The reference to the Global Village event is a nice touch, highlighting the importance of cultural heritage and the value of traditions. It is a reminder that sometimes we don't appreciate things until they are gone.The final lines are particularly powerful, suggesting that tinkling anklets can be a symbol of inner strength and resilience. It is a call to embrace the joy and beauty in life, even when facing challenges.🔥

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@⁨Priyanka Kamath⁩

113. Irascible hearts flame

 Irascible hearts flame*

I lost my job because of my anger lame

Let's uncover my story of irascible heart flame

In the fight between heart and mind

Choosing heart is always my find

I speak out everything without filter 

And realise only when I rethink over a coffee filter 

So my job in big four is still close to my heart 

This is my first job here and my lifes part

Three years here I was just doing codes

Whereas I could have achieved many milestone mode 

If I would ask my team to give me a chance to learn when free 

They would tell me that they aren't asked to teach me

Asking my manager I was literally drained

She would say that at right time I would be trained

The peer who joined recently was trained on all task

And why I was inefficient was the management's ask 

Then my manager sat next to me 

And said that operations task is not meant for me 

I said that I love my work and I am sincere 

I have always worked on the feedback and been transparent without fear 

Then came the all star awards turn

Purposely excluding my name from list was indeed a inner burn

I was although hinted about my exit 

I thought the opportunity to reply fit 

I told my manager that what she did to me was not right 

Isolating me for task and even prize was taken as a personal fight 

I told her she is bias and didn't do good 

Giving me my share of recognition was the least she could 

But then the things I told her in rage 

Resulted me in signing the termination page 

The most difficult part of this anger rant

Was even difficulty in changing department

Because my manager had put a poor rating 

And overcoming the same was a difficult setting 

I had to pay a high price for being tough 

And during the phase of my notice period working phase was rough 

Somehow I managed to work in other team 

performance based I am granted extension no less than a dream 

Since we are branch of same company tree

My previous manager happens to see me in pantry

Initial days were tough for us 

I used to find ways not to meet eyes 

But then two days back when I met 

I smiled as our eyes glued to each other set

It was awkward but we greeted beyond 

Like a broken glass with fevikol rebond

Although I know I can't drink with a broken base

But yes in my minds showcase I may keep her as memory phase 

So anger had made my jolly nature into bitter art

Also it had induced a sense of discomfort 

But one smile worked as a magic bliss

As I replaced my anger to forgiveness

Keeping grudge doesn't heal 

Winning an arguement is not a big deal 

After anger effect is a strange feel

I ended up being sad,upset and lack of zeal

Universe gave me a chance to restart 

I know life is not fair but it's ones karmic accounts part 

Even now I know I may not be my managers favourite 

But then handling diplomatically is a art

Same matter for which I was fighting over now seems lame 

This is one of my stories on my Irascible hearts flame !!!

©️ ✍️Priyanka Kamath 

09/09/2024

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Amazing 🔥

Highlighting topics of conflict, discrimination and the importance of emotional intelligence at the workplace, the story brilliantly provided valuable insights and personal perspectives. A positive message about ultimately forgiving and moving on, despite facing challenges, is commendable. Using figurative language and imagery effectively added to its beauty 🔥

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@⁨Priyanka Kamath⁩

112. Derivative

 What is a derivative ? 

Ans - Something that derives it's value from others. 

Example - Curd 

It derives it's value from Milk.

Say 1 kg curd =Rs. 70

        1 ltr milk = Rs. 40 

Why the difference in price??

Dhahi jamaane Mai wakt Lagta hai aur let's say it takes 1.5 litres milk to make 1kg Curd .

Now what happens if the milk price is reduced by 50 percent and curd price is double..

Is it possible??? Well .. yes if the demand and supply of milk and curd is independent of each other then this situation is possible. And we can apply arbitration to check on this disequilibrium.

How ??

See this 

So now milk price is 50 percent less which is 20 rs. And it takes 1.5 ltr to make a curd. So we are buying milk worth 30 rs to make 1 kg curd . The curd price is double so it's inflated to 140 rs now. 

Reasonable price hai for Dahi 40 rs and it's overvalued by 100 rs now. 

Overvalue hai toh sell Karo.. 

Sell Karne ke liye Dahi toh hai Nahi 

Toh kya ?? Jamaalo

30 rs .ke milk khareedo aur jamaalo and dhahi becho thode Kam mai..

Competitors will reduce price to stay in market .

And thus we being price equilibrium using arbitrage. 

111.Teacher - Architect of Tomorrow

 

Teacher - Architect of Tomorrow

Teachers day wishes to my first teacher.. 

My mother , academic ones as well as brother ..

In this poem I like to convey 

How I am a teacher in life's way

I have been a student sincere 

In workplace,an employee with seldom fear

A good student is not the one who takes

down just notes

It's one who practically applies when situation quotes

I am into operations task 

Not just processing the request  

also circulating the copy is the ask 

I generally miss to keep a track 

This is a trigger for efficiency lack 

My manager highlighted this fill

Self organising is a skill

I am teaching myself to have a approach solution based..

Maintaining a tracker and revisiting it, is efficient paced..

Repeating same mistake means focus lack 

Work should be like a set card pack 

To be organised and systamatic 

would make me content with workdone tick 

In life sometimes we should be our own teacher 

If the lessons learnt is underestimated, it will again feature 

It's more effective to play a dual role 

of teacher and student overall 

This will ensure I am in right track 

As a student if I do a mistake 

Teacher within me will rework

Hit on the target with the lifes arrow

Discipline is a teacher - an architect for tomorrow !!!

©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath 

3 September 2024

Review -

Excellent 🔥

Started your thoughts beautifully by mentioning your mother and brother as teachers, shows your love and respect for them❤️

By learning from our mistakes and taking responsibility for our growth, we can ensure we're on the right path.Brilliantly highlighted the dual roles we play in life as both teachers and students. Emphasised sincerity and efficiency in learning and work, stressing the importance of self-organization and problem-solving. The role of discipline as essential to achieving success was beautifully concluded.🔥

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@⁨Priyanka Kamath⁩