152. Echoes- Day 2

 Echoes -Day 2

There are three echoes I hear within

While one leads to good path, the other is a way to pleasure & sin

The third echo gives me a choice 

I often tend to opt for predominant voice 

My moms pure advice on stability was to chant God's name 

However, when I feel vulnerable I tend to choose a mind diversion game 

As the third echo of conscience 

If heard with proximity surely makes sense

Let not my inner echo be in clutter 

Will achieve mind  control through God's name utter

My manifestation for Day two

To build mind stability & towards self be True!!!

©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath 

Instagram -priyankakamath7 

2 April 2025

@⁨~Vipin V. Kamble⁩ 

151.Gender based violence - call for action

 

Gender based violence - call for action 

Violence can be categorized into social and personal bit

One can be going through a lot but can appear fit 

Violence form can also be emotional psychological division 

Putting forth my personal intake and vision 

Emotional violence isn't visible to bare eyes

One can be burning within but outside be nice 

I felt hurt when none of my relatives/ neighbours offered help for parents sake 

Now any interaction in a family event seems very fake 

Impact is such that meet up in any social invite 

Interactions leads to overthinking all night

When parents then shared with me about their hurt and feeling

My soft heart was bruised and kept peeling 

Those who have hurt them in anyway

Have caused me pain too someway

Psychological harm felt is gender neutral base

Intensity of hurt feels at same phase 

My female relatives asking on why ' no child till now ' syllables 

Male ones enquiring about my parents empty home status 

When I was 10 years old , it was a transition shift 

I too was a little girl expecting return gift 

But when my aunt didn't give me the toy lame 

Even when my mom got it for me it was never same 

That emotional impact I still do have lately

The hatred towards my uncle for touching me inappropriately 

On my not passing CA final exams I have been taunted so bad

The emotional damage is such that I felt like a failure and sad 

Now I know it's just one exam and it's never too late to give try 

But today even if I pass , I don't have parents to share this success but to cry 

My teacher in grade 4 used to hit me in thighs and always keep me out of class 

She was also one of the relatives who used to bad mouth me alas

She never knows how psychologically there was this strong impact

And only I know how I overcame these violence infact

I was beautiful chubby baby in my family flow

But I was always fat shamed and tried to feel low

As a child I was silent and had witness many form of violence 

My innocent mind has been impacted in each sense

Even though I have outgrown all these phase 

when I think about it I do feel I am slow in this healing race 

when parents were alive these people didn't care to be kind

And now to comment on my personal stuff, daring they find

Gradually when I accept normalcy and try to achieve free of mind 

I do understand that emotional balance is difficult to find 

I have overwhelming emotions fuss 

My healing is work in progress 

I am strong to mitigate the trauma

With immense blessings of my paa and maa

I still do get emotionally triggered and feel sick 

Each situation I do have an option to pick 

I can either keep blaming for everything wrong 

Or divert my mind into productive stuff listening to a nice song

A well organised routine is must to keep my mind sane

I accept my reality, work to be better , journal t

hem with no shame!!

✍️©️ Priyanka Kamath 

1 April 2025

Review 

Beautiful 😍 Your poem is a deeply powerful and courageous expression of resilience, self-awareness, and healing. It beautifully captures the unseen scars of emotional and psychological violence while highlighting the strength it takes to rise above them. The raw honesty in your words creates an intimate connection making us feel the weight of experiences and the depth of emotions. Despite the pain, your poem carries an undercurrent of hope, determination, and self-growth, reinforcing the importance of self-acceptance and perseverance. The way you emphasize healing as a journey, not a destination, adds an inspiring and relatable touch, reminding us that progress, no matter how slow, is still progress. Your ability to transform personal pain into a call for awareness and action is truly commendable, making this poem not just a reflection of past but also a beacon of strength for others who might relate.❤️❤️❤️

150.Serendipity - Day 1

 Serendipity - Day 1

This platform is my healing call 

To vent out and feel ok after each fall 

I take this opportunity to make it my manifestation journey this day 

To action on the things I everyday say

I feel I need to overcome my laziness

And focus on cleanliness 

My first manifestation for day 1 would be to daily clean up kitchen shelf 

To never miss out on daily writing challenge is a promise to myself 

To value time is indeed what I learnt this day to admit 

As I rush to submit my write up within time limit 

This is indeed a serendipity of event in life 

As God is teaching me to be more focussed and wise !!!

✍️©️ Priyanka Kamath 

Instagram -priyankakamath7 

1 April 2025

@⁨~Vipin V. Kamble⁩

149.Tears smiled*

 

*Tears smiled*

When things doesn't go as per my wish list

It would have Gods grace at gist 

Some days are heavy and I do feel low 

Example even if a colleague is cold, its impact flows 

My picture is intentionally cropped out from a office event 

I was indeed excited for one , but ended up being upset 

Out of all the pictures I could rewind 

Only one where my appearance I find 

And that's special because it's a momento I received 

And it's a memory worth to be preserved

Long back I was in loop of validation phase

A response would lead my expectation bar to raise 

Now I happen to receive reply from person same

And my manifesting this reality now seems lame 

Just like at once eating too much sweet 

Wouldn't anymore look like a delicious treat 

I wonder why did I even cry over these jerk

And now when I receive the attention it doesn't even look like a perk 

Possibly I have surpassed this path

My worldly pleasures seems to have had a purified bath

The same me who used to check my phone for one reply 

Now feel uncomfortable for message supply 

So I understand the tears which made me so vulnerable was for my good

And God's plan now I understood 

The tears I shed was actually leading me to smile 

But I couldn't visualise this from a mile 

On office front when I was transitioning from audit

lack of opportunity in other team felt like not receiving due credit 

But then when I worked under tax , I learnt the skill set 

That helped me to get contract with firm at present 

So everything is a chain 

I was then crying but was actually a hidden gain

Now I smile over the tears I shed 

I am grateful for the path it led 

I also miss the interaction I had with my parents main

I feel sad for their loss but smile that they aren't anymore in pain

God is taking care of them well

I have been gifted poetry route to tell

many times I feel silly and lack of ears 

Penning down my feelings instead of shedding tears 

Atleast by writing down helps me to heal this while 

And venting out makes me at ease and smile

I had certain issues and fear 

But facing it made sense than shedding tear

Now I smile with confidence as I overcame the tough time 

And I know that certain prickly path lead me to shine 

Life is a circle of smile and tear 

Winner is the one who overcomes fear !!!

✍️©️ Priyanka Kamath 

25 March 2025

Review 

Your poem is a beautiful reflection of personal growth, resilience and the transformation of pain into wisdom. It carries a deeply introspective tone, showing how past struggles whether in the workplace, relationship or personal experiences ultimately lead to newfound strength and clarity. The honesty in your words makes it deeply relatable capturing how small disappointments can feel overwhelming but later become stepping stones. You illustrated personal growth beautifully from seeking validation to realizing inner strength. Totally its inspiring showing how life's challanges lead to Transformation. ❤️

148. Cheek ek dard ki daastan anthology/title -Lame Office stories with moral of pain and gain

Same article  Titled guild of being innocent  and welcome from outside door posted in blog. This is a modified version.

Guilt of being innocent/ welcome from outside door combined to make Cheek ek dard ki daastan 

Lame Office stories with moral of pain and gain

The previous department I worked was kinda toxic 

It was best time for me to leave than feel sick.

But this decision was made not by me, but my boss 

And her removing me from office group took my feelings to toss...

I felt bad not because I wasn't valued in front of my peers

But expected an acknowledgement for being with her for so many years..

My innocence was my expression of feeling

Even after conveying,my mind was not healing

I transferred her this burden of guilt 

Although my feeling was pure and innocent...

She must have felt

What I meant 

This day she calls me in pantry 

To share with me her birthday pastry 

I could have easily avoided her and said no 

But earlier it was me who was desperate for my presence to show..

What goes around comes around 

And if she is being nice,then I am too bound 

I was guilty of making her feel sorry for me

I accepted her invite gracefully 

I should have definitely missed to attend 

However I had started ,so had to end..

At times I feel, I was yearning for her validation 

But when it came true ,I revisited my manifestation

There is a fine line in being innocent and fool

Mostly I cross this line ,but it's cool..

Above instance was when I was in Audit beat

Then while I worked in tax and same thing repeat

But now I didn't feel the instance as bitter 

As last experience helped me to handle this situation better 

Why should I even bother this scene 

Dwelling upon hurtful event only intensifies pain 

Focus should be now to be productive and knowledge to gain 

Some people we meet are chapter in book

Zoom out and preview they have an outlook 

Instead of seeing it like she is removed and required no more 

Why not look like welcoming from outside door

Turn this page on and see new chapter 

All stories do end with happily ever after 

Even if not we can make it with a smile 

Forgetting the bad and stepping a mille

These petty things I cried over as if it was vital 

With time these instances do look trivial 

Penning down this instance of being innocently guilty I realise

As long as I don't repeat my mistake,I am wise!!!

©️ Priyanka Kamath ✍️ 

24 March 2025

Bio 

Poetry is a way of expressing Priyanka's experience and stories.Life is a learning institution and sharing it in the form of write up is a healing process. She dedicates her work to her dear parents

147. shubh Vivah- Marriage

 *Marriage *

For me my relatives meant only parents and brother 

And special attention during my wedding seemed to bother 

Because I knew this is just for today 

But afterall it was my special day

The handful mehendi which would last Hardly for a week 

But spent thousands for this and makeup streak 

Smiling for pictures entire day on this feast 

And a surprise stay in a hotel which I enjoyed the least 

On one hand leaving parents home 

On other adjustments with in-laws dome

Settling up in abroad and learning chores 

Searching for job and enrolling in Exams course 

Getting to know my spouse with time 

And accepting him as mine 

From being lazy at all task towards being pro

Handling house chores along with going office to and fro

The transition has been nicer

Going to job has made me wiser 

Understanding self , spouse, work culture has been tough 

There were times I was either vulnerable or rough

Although my mother-in law is good

I have at times misunderstood

But now I have made peace 

And burden baggage left to release 

Marriage also comes with a question about kid 

And baby names in advance if it's alia or sid 

I also have succumbed to society pressure 

Couple with our age have one for sure 

But now I am taking things easy 

It's about doing  duty nicely and being busy 

Marriage is not just a licence to bear baby 

It's also about mutual understanding and not being shabby 

Things will fall in place at right time 

And life looks better and fine 

Just grateful to have a blessed married life 

And having a loving husband and being his doting wife!!!

©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath 

19 March 2025

146.Palace built on ruins

 

Palace built on ruins

Money can't buy class 

But my experience is trying alas!

The ruins had part of greed 

To detach from it I agreed

I used to not spend my money for luxurious live

And when I get any opportunity I wouldnt leave

Example I love cake, but I wouldnt buy 

If someone treats ,to have it all I wouldn't shy

Even after I started to earn 

There are many things in me to learn 

Slowly I am in learning process

On corporate grooming afresh 

This includes making my self esteem strong 

My mistakes include grabbing chocolates from my peers seat which is wrong 

In an event ,I happen to eat the biggest cake piece share 

resulting in having nothing left for peer

I have also taken food of someone's share 

And then gave it back when I realised on my part it was not fair

These were the bare basics I was taught

 

As I forgotten them, my self respect struggled a lot 

If someone tries to point out my error in nutshell 

I have cried over and intended to take it personal 

Also I have done things drawn in pleasure 

God has been great in preserving my respect treasure

All this has been the reason of my ruined base 

But God has been kind to give me chance always 

I am rebuilding my palace with strong root 

Putting my efforts and not thinking of ultimate fruit 

These experiences are like the paints of my wall

Different shades of vibrant color with grey waterfall 

I gathered courage to put the first building stone 

To take the feedback positive alone 

Actions should speak louder than words beautiful 

Journalling my true emotions is healing and Impactful 

It takes courage to self reflect on the most embarrassing things I have done

And sharing through poems as I dare to express towards none 

I am building my palace again being sincere and honest 

It can be in a tall space or even size of nest .

As long as the base 

is strong 

it can sustain long !!!

©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath 

18 March 2025

Review 

Your poem is a raw, introspective and deeply honest reflection on personal growth, self awareness and transformation. It beautifully captures the essence of learning from past mistakes, rebuilding with sincerity and striking for a stronger foundation. It is deep making powerful. Acknowledging both past mistakes and the effort to improve creates an inspiring narrative. It beautifully depicts both the high and lows of life. Your poem is beautiful testament to personal evolution and honesty in your writing makes it incredibly relatable. ❤️❤️