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Poignant ❤️
A touching portrayal of a sensitive soul grappling with the complexities of relationships. How the pain of past betrayal forces someone to be cautious and put up walls for protection is beautifully depicted. His ability to feel deeply is highlighted.❤️
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My moody nature makes me look selfish at times.
I initiate friendships but can never make them mine.
About a decade ago, there were two incidents during the rain.
I was supposed to feel comfort, but I only felt pain.
With one of my relatives, the friendship—at least from my side—felt real.
But I was just entertainment from their point of view, nothing to feel.
That whole situation left a deep impact,
And honestly, it changed my nature, in fact.
When another relative tried visiting us one day,
I didn’t even pick up the call—they were on their way.
It was raining heavily, yet they took so much pain
To find my house, in that storm and rain.
A simple communication from me could have made it all right.
But I stayed silent, and that didn’t feel right.
They were lovely people who genuinely cared,
But all I remember is the discomfort I shared.
That experience taught me something real—
Even now, friendship doesn’t feel like my deal.
And deep inside, I still feel sorry for that day,
For turning love and effort silently away
I’m cordial with everyone, but can’t stay close to many.
I enjoy my own space—too many ties feel heavy.
I never treated myself as a friend for long,
Now I walk the path to make that bond strong
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✍️©️ Priyanka Kamath
3 August 2025
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