Tuesday 29 October 2024

120. Dil wali Diwali

 



Dil waali Diwali 🪔 Anthology


Festival like Diwali was a wishful call


Helping mom with delicacy and distribute to all


Lighting diyas, cleaning home, wishing relatives and friend


May continue now too but those days had a different trend 


The most special thing was it was done with heart 


And festive season connected two ppl miles apart 


Peple used to visit houses to give handmade sweet 


Slowly it turned to store bought treat

I was accepting all the changing phases of festival season


However 'Dil'is missing in Diwali for the the below reason


Back in mangalore my parents stay in a society lane


Last year losing my mom was such a pain


Dad was doing ok as he has health issues odd


And I was looking for a help to stay with him as I stay abroad 


His health conditions wouldn't allow him to travel


And I was just waiting for my arrival 


My dad had his food arranged deal


He felt weak but missed his meal


He fell near gate and hurt his bone


And some road labourer helped him get home 


He called my bro who stays a bit far


I m glad he came on right time to attend dad's scar


As soon as he arrives at night 


my neighbour Nayana sees this and switchs off doors and light 


Due to body pain dad couldn't walk 


Although bro had kept water nearby he couldn't take


Dad calls me and said that he is thirsty and needs water


I called my neighbours for help as a human and not merely as a daughter 


Mrs. Lobo says she is going for mass so can't attend 


My other neighbour Mrs.Mallya who otherwise used to sweets send


Says that to give water noone will come

 

Other neighbour Kini said he is at work and treated me as if I am troublesome 


Dad's so called friend and relatives  who came to each of our family function

 

To relish the food, get gossips but none were there to share my concern 


Mrs.Lobo then sends her house help to give dad water 


And then calls me over phone later 


Mentions that for the favour that she has given broad 


She wants me to repay it by giving her nephew a job abroad


Sometimes I feel ppl are less human as technology pace doubles


As noone wants to take any unnecessary troubles


Real help is to be selfless and be kind towards someone in need 


This is what develops in good  karmic seed


Wishing a blissful festival and Pouring my heart with you all


I believe god is holding my hands and will never let me fall


Thankfully a good arrangement for dad is made at place


Only prayers for this Diwali is for him to heal by God's grace !!


©️✍️Priyanka Kamath

29-10-2024


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Awesomely awesome🔥

Your heart-warming words paint a beautiful picture of the transformation of Diwali, highlighting how it was once a festival of warmth and true bonding, but has now lost some of its essence in the modern world.🔥

Personal experiences highlight the difference between the idealised image of Diwali and the reality of human apathy. Despite the apathy, acts of compassion are also highlighted.Your views on the changing nature of relationships and the impact of technology are insightful. Your prayers for your father's recovery reflect the true spirit of the festival - a time of hope, healing and the triumph of light over darkness.🔥

May your father recover completely, and may Diwali bring you peace, joy and a renewed faith in humanity.🔥

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@⁨Priyanka Kamath⁩


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