Thursday, 8 May 2025

197. Mother's day

 *Mother's day*


Amma, You are my sunshine 

You would be 65 this time 

I wish I had a time machine

To bring you back fine 


Each time I pen down

Tears just roll down 

Every time I feel your charming smile 

It gives me courage to walk another mile


My each emotions you were aware 

Each day I would heartily share 

I have your voice notes at length 

I cry each time I hear,but it gives me strength 


I keep collecting your things now

But all I need is you Amma ,my love 

Whatever phases you may have seen

Always positive pure soul you been 


We surely have a connection deep 

I hope you wake up from your deep sleep 

Hug me and tell me that I was just seeing a bad dream 

You are still here with me and let's celebrate today with a ice cream 


Even when I grow older 

I wish I could have your shoulder 

We have made so many memories together 

I am blessed to be your daughter my dear mother 


You are celebrating this say in heaven king sized 

I will follow your way of life and be more organised 

You are painfree and in peace sure

Happy Mother's day gondi ,I miss you more!!


✍️ Priyanka Kamath 

8 May 2025


Review

Poignant ❤️

A heartwarming creation beautifully expressed a daughter’s deep love and yearning for her late mother on Mother’s Day. The simple yet powerful language expressed the pain of loss and the memories that remain. Beautifully touched upon the comfort found in past memories, such as her smile and voice notes, while also highlighting the irreplaceable void her absence has created. The closing lines expressed the longing for a comforting embrace and a simple shared joy, emphasising the enduring bond that extends beyond even death. Overall, this is a touching tribute filled with true emotion and love.❤️

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