*Mother's day*
Amma, You are my sunshine
You would be 65 this time
I wish I had a time machine
To bring you back fine
Each time I pen down
Tears just roll down
Every time I feel your charming smile
It gives me courage to walk another mile
My each emotions you were aware
Each day I would heartily share
I have your voice notes at length
I cry each time I hear,but it gives me strength
I keep collecting your things now
But all I need is you Amma ,my love
Whatever phases you may have seen
Always positive pure soul you been
We surely have a connection deep
I hope you wake up from your deep sleep
Hug me and tell me that I was just seeing a bad dream
You are still here with me and let's celebrate today with a ice cream
Even when I grow older
I wish I could have your shoulder
We have made so many memories together
I am blessed to be your daughter my dear mother
You are celebrating this say in heaven king sized
I will follow your way of life and be more organised
You are painfree and in peace sure
Happy Mother's day gondi ,I miss you more!!
✍️ Priyanka Kamath
8 May 2025
Review
Poignant ❤️
A heartwarming creation beautifully expressed a daughter’s deep love and yearning for her late mother on Mother’s Day. The simple yet powerful language expressed the pain of loss and the memories that remain. Beautifully touched upon the comfort found in past memories, such as her smile and voice notes, while also highlighting the irreplaceable void her absence has created. The closing lines expressed the longing for a comforting embrace and a simple shared joy, emphasising the enduring bond that extends beyond even death. Overall, this is a touching tribute filled with true emotion and love.❤️
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