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Beautifully captures the essence of finding joy in the minutiae of everyday life. The strength of the piece lies in the specific and relevant images it contains, from a perfect eyeliner wing to the tribute to loved ones. Effectively utilizing rhyming couplets, it conveys a powerful message of gratitude and contentment with ease.❤️
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g ❤️*Little things*Hey Priyanka @Priyanka Kamath
Your poem “Little Things” is like a heartfelt gratitude journal woven into verse. What I loved most is how you captured joy in such a wide spectrum of moments—from the sparkle of a winged eyeliner to the soulful act of feeding furry babies. It shows how beauty exists both in self-love and in kindness shared with others.
The couplets give the poem a rhythmic flow, almost like daily affirmations. Lines like “Daily catch up with my parents who are in heaven / A good tight sleep and waking up before seven” are especially touching—they carry so much e
motion, balancing memory, routine, and love with grace.
There’s also a strong sense of spirituality throughout, which makes the poem shine brighter. I felt the mix of gratitude, simplicity, and faith blend beautifully, reminding us how little joys keep us grounded even in life’s challenges.
If I may suggest, a touch more polishing of rhyme in some places could make the flow even smoother—but honestly, the raw charm and sincerity are its real strength.
Such a wholesome, uplifting piece—you made “little things” feel like big blessings.
Beautifully expressed!
With admiration,
~ Shivangi
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Hello, beautiful souls of MNR! 🌼✨
What an absolutely heartwarming celebration of life's tiny treasures! Your words didn't just describe joy—they became joy itself. From steaming chai to rainy days, from old notes to gentle touches, you reminded us that happiness often hides in the smallest corners of our lives. Reading your entries felt like collecting little pearls of light!
After soaking in all that warmth and wonder, here are our top three winners:
🥈 *Priyanka Kamath – “Little Things”* @Priyanka Kamath
Your words flowed like a grateful heartbeat! From spirituality to simple routines, you celebrated joy in all its forms. We could feel the mindfulness and resilience shining through every line. A beautiful, rhythmic reminder to cherish the everyday! 🧘♀️🌿
I am someone who finds joy in little things
Even an act of kindness in form of a simple smile gives me wings
An email from an affectionate friend
Letter writing is never out of trend
That perfect wing eye liner and hairdo is a lovely feel
Entire day it ensures confidence and zeal
Watching TV with loved one after a heavy day
Writing a poem while commuting from office on the way
Documenting my poetry certificates with poem in my blog appeals
Learning and posting new ways of doing reels
Sharing my tit bits of learnings to someone who need
Seeing happiness in face of furry babies when I feed
Being grateful to this beautiful experiences God has been giving
Letting go of any hurt to forget and forgiving
Daily catch up with my parents who are in heaven
A good tight sleep and waking up before seven
Doing my duty with love and grace
Having faith in almighty in facing life's challenging phase
These little moments makes life easier with mood uplifted
Blessed and grateful for this little joys I am gifted !!!
✍️©️ Priyanka Kamath
18 Sept 2025
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