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Your poem is a beautiful reminder to stay strong, trust God, and keep moving forward even when the path ahead is unclear. I love the way you highlighted that you learn humbleness from the tall trees and find hope even as night falls. It is a very inspiring, positive, and heart-touching piece—wonderful work✍️✨
I am walking in faith wearing my confidence in sleeve
The path unknown but I feel positive
The grass appears as if my favourite God is seated
I may step in thorn but will never be defeated
Picture clicked in dawn and disk appear similar
Why does the gloominess seem familiar?
Is it the similar situation again?
I hope to not repeat the past mistakes of pain
I believed that I am so tall and can never fumble
Tall trees gives me a reminder to st
ay humble
The destination seemed so near
It's already dusk and I can't see any path clear
I walk as if blindfolded with feel faith away from fear
God will protect me ,he is within my reach so near
This night shall too pass and awaiting to see the morning again
And have self belief, determination, Will power to restart regain
No pain ,No gain
No effort will ever go in vain
This journey is a beautiful chapter of my lifes leap
Miles to go before I sleep !!!
©️ Priyanka
Kamath
21 July 2026
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