138.महता नारी की

 

महता नारी की

कल्पना से भरी मेरी दुनिया में भगवान ले आया 

एसे उन्होने ने समर्पण के साथ महिला को बनाया

उन्होंने शक्ति और समर्पण की मूल सामग्री को भरा 

इसे बहु-कार्य शक्ति और करुणा को साथ मे मिलाया 

नारी में 'न' का अर्थ नम्रता

महिला में चुनने और सुनिश्चित का विकल्प भरता 

यह प्रत्येक महिला ने समझा और सुना 

कुछ बने माँ की गुड़िया और बाकी ने 

पापा की परी बनना चुना

अब देखते हैं भगवान ने मुझे कैसे बनाया

सामान रूपी कई गुण का ढेर लगाया 

उसमे भावनाएँ, प्यार, देखभाल पाया 

अहंकार, ईर्ष्या, भय, क्रोध के पैकेट मे न हिचकिचाहट थी

बाहरी पैकिंग बहुत सुन्दर इसलिए थैले मे भर ली

आइसक्रीम की एक बाल्टी सोच की थी। पैकेट का नाम था सोच किंग 

मैंने अधिक स्कूप लिए और अंत में बना स्वभाव ओवरथिंकिंग 

अपनी भावनाओं सीमित करने मैंने बहुत सारे पानी के बोतले किए इक्कठे salty 

इसके परिणामस्वरूप कभी भी बहा देती हूं आँसू की बाल्टि

हालांकि चुनाव कर रही थी सब तत्व 

मैंने महिला के 'म' को भुला दिया शायद जो है 'मातृत्व' 

सही वक्त पर गोद भी भर देगा, विश्वास अटूट बनाया

शुद्ध सोने के दिल से महत्व महिला का सुंदर बनाया! ! !

हर हर महादेव!

प्रियंका कामत

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बायो

प्रियंका किसी दिन अपनी खुद की किताब लिखने का लक्ष्य रखती है। उनका प्रत्येक लेख उनके अपने अनुभव से है। वह अपना काम अपने प्रिय माता-पिता को समर्पित करती है

137.Finding answers*

 *Finding answers*

My wandering mind has no tag

As if I am Searching the right bag

Sometimes I go back in past 

And wish the memories would last

During Shivaratri my dad used to get panak from temple 

I tried to make this in his memory a sample

It didn't turn out well

I wish I learnt mom's dishes beforehand well

I am craving for the panchakajayi she made 

The recipe she might have told before , but memories just fade

I generally make so many videos rant

Why don't I have any of my parent?

Why doesnt time heal the pain?

Where is their path lane?

The memories which lead me to joy within

Why do I cry now when Google photos flashes them 

I am literally afraid to go back home 

Each memories is so special known

I feel very low sometime but God is kind 

Diverting my mind is the only solution I find 

Oh good God, please help me in finding my fence 

Help me Boost my self worth and confidence!!!

Happy Maha Shivaratri 🙏 

©️✍️ Priyanka kamath

26/02/2025

Review 

It elegantly captures nostalgia and longingness and the bittersweet nature of memories. The personal touch like Shivaratri, panak etc add warmth and depth feeling intimate and relatable. It makes the poem strongly relatable reminding us our own memories. Its tangible and unique poem. Overall a beautiful poem ⭐💫 keep writing and sharing ❤️

136. My inner truth

 

*My inner truth*

Towards others I am very kind 

But self stress ,no relief I find 

Thinking after speaking

Is like storing water after leaking 

The collected water isn't pure

Can't take back spoken words anymore 

Moody me lacks being consistent 

Mostly scrunched face or at times bloom like a floral scent

Office presence has culture hybrid 

To master art is between lines to read

My inner self chooses comfort over fashion 

But as advised , now I groom up well with passion 

Inner truth is that I like speaking less, working more 

But I am learning to be social and smarter for sure 

Inner truth is revealed in power pack 

I know that people do speak behind my back 

But efforts to keep my mind in clean space

Inner truth is to be positive and handle each phase 

Earlier when I was asked how was my weekend 

My responses were long expressing end to end

I have changed my answers not with intention to be plastic 

But towards on my journey to be elastic 

Answering 'Weekend was good though short ' comes as breeze 

Makes formal Small talks easier ,not hampering mind peace

My inner truth is to preserve energy towards Lord

And speaking endlessly to almighty God 

My inner truth is also to self explore 

And understand myself more

Each day is a learning dent 

In this life institute, I am always a student 

©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath 

25-02-2025

@⁨~Surangama⁩ 

Review 

Amazing couplet with rhythmic rhyming words. It is deeply personal and reflective piece capturing the naunces of life navigating social expectations. Its authentic struggling with social interactions, self improvement and emotional balance in a professional and personal space. It is connectable with this journey while staying true to oneself. It creatively express the idea of personal growth and adaptability. The ending ties back to faith and exploration showing deeper aspect of truth. Totally a wonderful poem ❤️

135.Sufiana ishq*

 

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@⁨Priyanka Kamath⁩ You really gave me goosebumps via your such an emotive narration. You really made me 'Sufiyana' by your chaste ' Sufiyana Ishq'. Your shivering sentimental voice while reciting could be distinctly touched me. Keep reciting, keep participating.... 🌼🌼🌼🌼🌼

*Sufiana ishq*

Falling in love is Ishq

Rising is sufiana Ishq

Ppl do flaunt when in love 

The affection often tend to show 

But sufiana is a treasure 

Between me and the super power

My definition of love included this list

Attachment, greed ,Power and lust 

Attachment lead me to being possessive

Greed to hoard everything massive 

Power to have my love act to my wish 

Lust to have the pleasures ishhh!!

In this ocean where I could have driven deep 

I was comfortable being shallow steep

Worldly pleasures still make me crazy 

And being toxic , unproductive and lazy

My bubbles busted in pot 

Reality check when I got 

Always I thought 

I am spiritual,I do prayers a lot 

Pride started to bloom 

As if I am a bride and sufiana Ishq is groom

I terribly failed to know 

Ice from the freezer is not snow 

As Chanting god's name 

Parallely playing mind game

Doesn't go hand in hand 

My karma put me in trouble band

Giving someone false hope

And creating trust issues scope

Is a bad deed which I can't reverse 

I am bound to suffer this curse 

In God's court , mistake can be forgiven 

But what about intentional hurt driven ?

Here starts my karma cleansing 

Removed one chunk by sincerely apologizing 

Next chunk was harder shelf

As I couldn't forgive myself 

And final one is repentance 

Offering to Lord my sorry sentence 

I said to self that I am willing to suffer

I accept my wrong doings buffer 

Corrupted mind can't see the true love instance 

God still gave me love in abundance 

The realisation I got , the tears I shed 

Is also sufiana Ishq to get sleep in bed

Offering gratitude took me close to Lord

And we connect through souls cord

I can feel sufiana Ishq with Lord pure 

When I love myself to the core

Self love is regardless of pampering 

It's rather about self awareness and caring 

Placing words well is a million dollar skill 

It can give life to any relation or even kill 

Oh God , your love for me I deeply feel 

Please repair me and help me heal 

Thank you for being there 

Showering abundant love and care

Purify me from my vices and potential risk

Dip me in the colours of sufiana Ishq!!!

✍️©️ Priyanka Kamath

25 July 2025

Review 

Surmita 

Babe I just watched oh my god you at best in this video and also the superb I can see the immense amount of emotions pouring out of heart and the sufiana love emerging in eyes 

The moments when u talking about karmic and toxic connections and relating to god is next level taking the pitch to cloud 9

Anthology sufiana Ishq 

**Bio

Poetry is a way of expressing Priyanka's experience and stories.Life is a learning institution and sharing it in the form of write up is a healing process. She dedicates her work to her dear parents.

**Sufiana ishq*

Falling in love is Ishq

Rising is sufiana Ishq

People do flaunt when in love  

The affection often tend to show 

But sufiana is a treasure 

Between me and the super power

My definition of love included this list

Attachment, greed ,Power and lust 

Attachment lead me to being possessive

Greed to hoard everything massive 

Power to have my love act to my wish 

Lust to have the pleasures ishhh!!

In this ocean where I could have driven deep 

I was comfortable being shallow steep

Worldly pleasures still make me crazy 

And being toxic , unproductive and lazy

My bubbles busted in pot 

Reality check when I got 

Always I thought 

I am spiritual,I do prayers a lot 

Pride started to bloom 

As if I am a bride and sufiana Ishq is groom

I terribly failed to know 

Ice from the freezer is not snow 

As Chanting god's name 

In parallel playing mind game

Doesn't go hand in hand 

My karma put me in trouble band

Giving someone false hope

And creating trust issues scope

Is a bad deed which I can't reverse 

I am bound to suffer this curse 

In God's court , mistake can be forgiven 

But what about intentional hurt driven ?

Here starts my karma cleansing 

Removed one chunk by sincerely apologizing 

The next chunk was a harder shelf

As I couldn't forgive myself 

And the final one is repentance 

Offering to Lord my sorry sentence 

I said to myself that I am willing to suffer

I accept my wrong doings buffer 

Corrupted mind can't see the true love instance 

God still gave me love in abundance 

The realisation I got , the tears I shed 

Is also sufiana Ishq to get sleep in bed

Offering gratitude took me close to Lord

And we connect through the souls cord

I can feel sufiana Ishq with Lord pure 

When I love myself to the core

Self love is regardless of pampering 

It's rather about self awareness and caring 

Placing words well is a million dollar skill 

It can give life to any relation or even kill 

Oh God , your love for me I deeply feel 

Please repair me and help me heal 

Thank you for being there 

Showering abundant love and care

Purify me from my vices and potential risk

Dip me in the colours of sufiana Ishq!!!

✍️©️ Priyanka Kamath

Newspaper Feature 

134. Movie Time

 

*Movie time*

Movie is enjoyment source 

Am I a movie ? Yes of course 

There is a pattern I observe

My funny bones, In a platter I serve 

I was popular in school college 

As was free spirited without a baggage 

When I was happy, people were around 

But when needed them I found 

Myself alone in crowd 

One who have tasted appreciation

Tends to seek validation 

I was seeking constant relevance 

My jovial nature would get me joy in abundance 

After my parents exited my story 

Here started my worry

And in order to make self fine

Started socialising this time 

I see in myself a pattern of need

Constant validation to feed

I tried portraying self as funny billy

Not realising I was losing respect and was taken silly 

Over my jokes someone can laugh 

But when in need,I see their presence with heart half 

Suppose if I have no more impactful array 

And still if I choose  to share worry 

Society doesn't find the movie entertaining

And they switch channel for joy attaining 

I understood what being used looked at it's best

To get information, entertainment and be Catalyst 

In my movie I am my hero and creative lead 

I will ensure to not anymore entertain creepers and feed

My energy shouldn't drain 

On people who treat me a movie in vain

I am although my lead character dent

But should not be a source of others entertainment 

Starting of the story I can't change 

But I will script the climax in unique range 

Let me focus on acting

Let God be directing 

So that I work on the script that he has given 

And be focussed and duty driven 

Ofcourse my movie should have comic element

My family and self to be happy intent 

But I shouldn't let my emotions be open for all odd

It's a treasure to be preserved and shared with God 

My movie is straight forward 

Me spicing up too much looks absurd

Self respect and happiness within is the key fit

In my eyes my own movie should be a super hit 

©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath 

14-1-2025

Amazing 😍  I loved the idea of becoming a movie itself in the poem. I loved the line questioning "Am I movie?, yes of course ' that was deeply introspective as if reflecting on self. Adding god as a director is a beautiful divine touch in movie of our life. I also loved the line, 'after my parents exited my story, here started my worry', it was so relatable. And the line, 'script has given...' is so deep which makes us to think about our life script which is given and what should we do as our duty. Its eye opener. Keep sharing ❤️

Superb❤️

I appreciate your creativity ❤️

The beautifully woven emotions highlighted the experience of overcoming societal pressures and finding one's true identity. Described as a journey of a man who was initially known for his cheerful nature, but slowly gets trapped in a quest for validation and constant external approval. Metaphorically comparing him to a "movie", highlighting how his entertaining personality became a source of entertainment for others, leading to a feeling of being used and a gradual erosion of self-esteem. 

Through introspection and a new understanding of his worth, he resolves to prioritise his happiness and authenticity, writing a new story where self-esteem and inner fulfilment take centre stage. This insightful piece is commendable.❤️

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133.Venting out

 Venting out 

Earlier when used to write poetry mine 

Always thought to align rhyme

I was accustomed to keep in general line 

As too much expression in public platform is not fine 

Slowly I expressed less

As my emotions play mess

Today as I felt low

Lack of focus and slow

Sometimes even a silly matter bother

I know I should focus on priority things rather 

Example I posted a video in family group 

Noone reacted thus came in my toxic troop 

Someone ignored me or if didn't match my tone 

To deviate mind I kept on browsing phone 

I didn't feel at peace 

Why do I think I am unhealed and still in piece ?

I am grateful and do count on my blessing

Then why at times loneliness comes hissing 

I was in verge of drenching in negative thought

Thus I started writing down without another thought 

The silliness bothering me aren't worth

I should wash them off just like a sticky dirt

Tears just flow for no reason

I shouldn't give my lethargy a boost each season 

Many things I should take easy 

I should be productive and be busy

With this self talk with gratitude I bow 

Poetry is helping me come out of my phase low

©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath 

3 Jan 2025

Feedback 

Fabulous 🔥

Beautifully depicted internal struggles, honestly reflected on the suppression of emotions, the effect of social media on self-esteem and the struggle with negative thoughts. Battling with feelings of loneliness and a tendency to get caught up in trivial matters, accepted writing as a blessing. The act of writing itself is a cathartic experience, helping one process their emotions and emerge from a low phase.🔥

Highlighted the power of self-reflection and creative expression in dealing with internal struggles and emotional challenges, is commendable 🔥

Keep penning

Keep rocking 🔥

@⁨Priyanka Kamath⁩

132.Konkani poem

 Tigele msg ayile makka

Sangunu msg Kari takka 

Tee- Tanni vichaarnu sangtha Kai 

Ammi call korche samm Nai

 

Me -Chelle Ammak call Kari 

Maagiri migele ullai pot bhari 

Me - itte goh haav kasa monche 

Tumgel jaavnanthu haav nai nonche

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Tikka bhaari oori Assa pakka

Chekkek msg kelle ve Akka

Itte goh tukka atta hataa

Mayyen sangtaana ashil ve sankata

Tugel feminism asshile bhaari

Apan shikkun kaam korka ,Tari Kari 

Vardik jalle tashhi baabu korka nave 

Taavali kaam sodka nave 

Tari itte makka msg koruk sangta tuva

Tugel aan ammale ekkichi dhuva

Arrangement Kari tanka

Apnal vairi depend kornakka 

Khanche Chellek guna polonu jaitha mana ki

Mukavaile plan kornu tasal arrangement chooki 

Tugele sansaaru polono ghe , yeah tangi akka

Baggage ghevnu bhonakka

Tukka taagel ammale ullochak kasa problem 

Internally takka convince korche nai samm 

Arrange marriage set up yein 

Feminism hanga chalna ghe 

Ekka jibben donni ullonakka 

Ek pati mantha kaam karta , aaek pati migel katir ullai akka

Konakai judge korche nai, varkik khelu nai 

Practically lekkuka life decision yeah 

Ardaari course solla teene ,Vai !

Para barsartas Bangaloraa training Kai 

Haav malle doni doniri payi darvarnakka 

Mann divnu kaam Kari , gadi gadi Decision change kornakka

Samaachi bhajjun aayli tikka 

Tigel pre plans gothas makka !!

11 jan 25

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