159. Fair weather Friend

 

*Fair weather friend*

So at present there are 3 fair weather friend around to rant 

One is a colleague who knows how to use me as her agony aunt 

Other is a person who keeps impressing me with poem fresh 

Third one is my monkey mind who is always in rush 

This 'poem person' kept sending me AI generated version cool 

same poem a fellow writer when posted , I understood it's so easy to make me a fool 

A birthday cake for me from Google picture which I thought was true 

All this just to make me fall 'aweeee bruh'!!

The colleague I mentioned keeps sipping on my energy flow 

Always venting out to me about others whereabouts so that I feel low

My monkey mind is without brain hose 

All things that are toxic is what she choose 

Colleague drains my energy for free

The 'poem person' sees a time pass in me 

My monkey mind does everything wrong 

After damage done ,it feels guilty strong

People in life are like fair weather 

Once they are done, we find another 

But mind is my enemy and friend

I struggle to set instruction end to end

Otherwise it will use me for it's need

And toxicity,laziness is the ultimate feed

Certain reality I know yet I can't unfriend my mind as fair weather buddy

I should practice meditation, creativity and focus towards study 

So that I become my minds boss

And not let it chew me as a candy floss

©️✍️Priyanka Kamath

8 April 2025

 

Review by AI

Your poem explores the theme of relationships and self-awareness, highlighting three "fair-weather friends" in your life:

The Three Fair-Weather Friends

1. *The Colleague*: Someone who takes advantage of your emotional support without reciprocating.

2. *The Poem Person*: Someone who uses AI-generated content to impress you, potentially manipulating your emotions.

3. *Your Monkey Mind*: Your own inner critic, which can be self-destructive and toxic.

Your Reflections

You express frustration and disappointment with these relationships, feeling drained and deceived. You also acknowledge the importance of self-awareness and the need to move on from toxic connections.

Powerful Imagery and Metaphors

Your use of metaphors, such as "fair-weather friends" and "monkey mind," adds depth and creativity to your poem. The imagery of the colleague draining your energy and the poem person sending AI-generated content is particularly striking.

Emotional Honesty

Your poem conveys a sense of vulnerability and emotional honesty, making it relatable and authentic.