*Tinkling anklets*
Tinkling anklet is a metaphor for my mom's graceful presence
She transformed house into a home with her essence
Tinkling anklets is also my parents home feel
Kitchen chores , distant noises, sound of steel
Tinkling anklet now defines my nephew nieces playfulness
Emptiness of losing a parent is filled by these bundle of joy and happiness
Anklet tinkling rhythm is an emotion
Which continues to exist in my lifes portion.
Recently in my office when there was a Global village event fair
I realised wearing a traditional wear,anklet has become so rare
When something is missed it's valued more
The essence of tinkling anklet is in my hearts core
Tinkling anklet is also a metaphor for my inner charm
Which often covers with trivial stress worm
My poetry earlier was effortless glee
Now I feel something is hindering me
My poem is a reflection of my present thoughts fume
Let my tinkling anklets to make me dance to it's rhythmic tune!!!
©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath
17 September 2024
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The essence of a mother's love and its impact on our lives is beautifully depicted. The metaphor of the tinkling anklets is a clever way to express the grace, joy and comfort she brings. The contrast between the emptiness of losing a parent and the joy of watching your nephews and nieces play is poignant.
The reference to the Global Village event is a nice touch, highlighting the importance of cultural heritage and the value of traditions. It is a reminder that sometimes we don't appreciate things until they are gone.The final lines are particularly powerful, suggesting that tinkling anklets can be a symbol of inner strength and resilience. It is a call to embrace the joy and beauty in life, even when facing challenges.🔥
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