Tuesday, 11 March 2025

143.My first vehicle and memories with it


 *My first vehicle and memories with it*


Two wheeler which my brother got 

It was so special I never thought 


Necessity is the mother of invention 

Riding vehicle was a purpose driven intention


I used to bring groceries through it 

To cater parents medical need was rightly fit


All way through public transport

Challenge was then to visit my old grandparent 


It taught me invaluable lesson to balance 

When life gave different genre to dance

 

Scooty also taught when to put brake 

It's important to pause , process and be not fake 


After I went away from town noone used it till date

And it started being obsolete 


Scooter was gone one fine day such 

Teaching me to be connected and not attached ,but I still love it so much


Just as it needs maintainence , fueling share

Our body is a vehicle which needs care


Exercise, good thoughts, good deed 

Mind space is also influenced by the food we feed


I also learned one day after serving purpose we should leave 

The memories and confidence it gifted is a timeless eve


But I never used it for a fun ride 

Task completed through it was a matter of pride


It loved me too and kept me safe

Riding it was my happy space


Two wheeler catered to all needs without second thought 

So many life lessons too it taught


My parents precious smiles it has got

A blessing to me I value throughout!!


©️✍️Priyanka Kamath

11 March 2025


Reviews:-


Amazing😍✨


Content is unique ❤✨


Well written🌼✨

                    

Regards, 


V.Vaishnavi - English jury, Pious poetry.



Review 

Wooow❤️

The emotional value and life lessons learned from the first vehicle, the scooter, are beautifully depicted. Beyond the common narrative of seeing the vehicle as just a means of transportation, it highlights its role in fulfilling essential needs, promoting independence, and imparting knowledge about balance, isolation, and self-care. The emotional connection to the scooter is evident, especially in how it facilitated acts of service and brought happiness to the family. The scooter is effectively used as a metaphor for dealing with life's challenges, emphasizing the importance of maintenance, purpose, and the bitter-sweet nature of letting go❤️

Well done ❤️

Keep Penning

Keep Rocking❤️

@⁨Priyanka Kamath⁩

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