*My first vehicle and memories with it*
Two wheeler which my brother got
It was so special I never thought
Necessity is the mother of invention
Riding vehicle was a purpose driven intention
I used to bring groceries through it
To cater parents medical need was rightly fit
All way through public transport
Challenge was then to visit my old grandparent
It taught me invaluable lesson to balance
When life gave different genre to dance
Scooty also taught when to put brake
It's important to pause , process and be not fake
After I went away from town noone used it till date
And it started being obsolete
Scooter was gone one fine day such
Teaching me to be connected and not attached ,but I still love it so much
Just as it needs maintainence , fueling share
Our body is a vehicle which needs care
Exercise, good thoughts, good deed
Mind space is also influenced by the food we feed
I also learned one day after serving purpose we should leave
The memories and confidence it gifted is a timeless eve
But I never used it for a fun ride
Task completed through it was a matter of pride
It loved me too and kept me safe
Riding it was my happy space
Two wheeler catered to all needs without second thought
So many life lessons too it taught
My parents precious smiles it has got
A blessing to me I value throughout!!
©️✍️Priyanka Kamath
11 March 2025
Reviews:-
Amazing😍✨
Content is unique ❤✨
Well written🌼✨
Regards,
V.Vaishnavi - English jury, Pious poetry.
Review
Wooow❤️
The emotional value and life lessons learned from the first vehicle, the scooter, are beautifully depicted. Beyond the common narrative of seeing the vehicle as just a means of transportation, it highlights its role in fulfilling essential needs, promoting independence, and imparting knowledge about balance, isolation, and self-care. The emotional connection to the scooter is evident, especially in how it facilitated acts of service and brought happiness to the family. The scooter is effectively used as a metaphor for dealing with life's challenges, emphasizing the importance of maintenance, purpose, and the bitter-sweet nature of letting go❤️
Well done ❤️
Keep Penning
Keep Rocking❤️
@Priyanka Kamath
No comments:
Post a Comment