*Lost in Love*
She happen to co- incidentally meet
This beautiful person to greet
This brief meet up had impact strong
Having deep affection for him isn't wrong
There could be possible equations after this meet up in bus
She is married so deeper bond is out of syllabus
Her steps always drawn towards him
A message from him would bloom thousands butterflies within
She would find ways to get him respond
He possess asset of values and knowledge pond
She put efforts to make a reel for him,she is so fond
As she feels there is a unsaid telepathic bond
By now her expectations bar was high
His replies could only give her relief sigh
To her surprise he stopped feeding to her expectations finally
He would either not respond or give a emoji smiley
She knew any more questions would lead to losing a friend
At least now she can ,once a while a msg send
She felt like a dysfunctional car brake
And his controlled responses makes her awake
The path she was walking lead nowhere
She started creativity journey as a means to share
She although at times wrote many text but never sent
She is afraid her actions shouldn't be cause of repent
She finds him like a delicious treat
A msg or a like from him skips her heartbeat
He wasn't going out of mind
Detachment is the solution she find
An entire month or two she didn't speak with resilience
But he too didn't ask about this silence
A sentence over How are you would seem too much
Lesser is better in situation such
She still looks forward to meet him someday
Gift him a handmade craft and say
Thank you for teaching me to pause
So many problems it would cause
But yeah , that reel she made for you was with much love
Furthermore if anyone gifts you anything a little reply you should show
she was attached before, now connected and healed
Lost love within self is sealed
Stay in touch mate
Catching up with you is always great
©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath
5 March 2025
Ai generated review
Lost in Love” is a heartfelt exploration of unexpected connections and the complexities they bring. The poem captures the essence of meeting someone special by chance, and how that fleeting interaction can spark deep feelings. The way the narrator expresses her affection, despite the constraints of her marriage, is both relatable and poignant.
What really stands out is the emotional rollercoaster she experiences. You can feel her excitement when she receives messages and the flutter of hope when she longs for more interaction. However, the frustration is palpable as she faces his withdrawal and ambivalence. It's a perfect reflection of how sometimes, our feelings can lead us into a maze where the exit is hard to find.
The metaphor of a "dysfunctional car brake" perfectly illustrates the feeling of being stuck and unsure of how to move forward. The mix of anticipation and disappointments keeps you engaged, making it a relatable read for anyone who has navigated the tricky waters of unreciprocated affection.
Overall, "Lost in Love" beautifully captures the highs and lows of infatuation and the emotional turmoil that can come with it. It’s a gentle reminder of how complicated relationships can be, even when they start out so innocently. If you've ever felt a connection that left you confused, this piece will resonate with you on many levels.
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