Review
You’ve beautifully portrayed this honest, relatable journey from seeking validation to rediscovering your true creative spark. The way you’ve forged your own unique path—leaving behind the pressures of your roots and building confidence on your own terms—is so inspiring. Keep writing from your heart and keep moving to that new rhythm; your true magic lies in your authentic voice.💕
I am the skimmed version of my ancestors in terms of my skills in line
My journey on poetry ,art and craft was rooted back to my school time
I was not liked by my relatives or my teachers in school days
With no friends around I seeked validation all ways
The moment I wrote for myself,I did things for my genuine love abundance
I felt a positive change in me , started gaining confidence
Automatically it seemed like people started noticing me
I enjoyed the phase where I felt powerful and free
As all fingers are not same ,so is the life phase
I fell in the loop of validation chase
This is the exact point where the glass of my transparent self shattered
As anyone's reaction to my work mattered
Even after constant efforts I write any poem fearing
As if the writing wings I have is disappearing
The skimmed version of me feel more diluted
My focus seems so much diverted
Starting back fresh is my way of giving me a chance again
Being rooted to my genuine self and to confidence regain
I may never match the genre of talent my ancestors roots had
But now I see a change in mindset to explore me ,my qualities good and bad
Things I missed in past or the shattered glass can't be same
Being in present and doing my best in things I can is my aim
Root of rhythm is activated within me where every beginning finds it's beat
I will improve , keep writing and do things I love in repeat !!!
©️ Priyanka Kamath
9 Aug 2026
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