Father-a safe embrace"
Review
This poignant poem beautifully captures the complex and evolving relationship with a father. It moves from the initial awkwardness of physical embrace to a deeper understanding of love expressed through consistent care and communication. The lines “Each mistakes we earlier pointed out faded away / Only now we knew to lead life fair” are particularly touching, highlighting a mature and forgiving bond. The poem concludes with a heartfelt tribute to a father’s sacrifices and the peace found in his final rest, creating a truly moving narrative of love, gratitude, and remembrance.❤️
Keep writing, keep shining ❤️
Only embrace that was entertained was of my mother
Men in family are seen with respect further
So even when I hugged dad, he wasn't used to the tug
I was also taller than him so I wasnt either fitting the hug
But yes he loved me very much
We even fought but were never out of touch
I remember my last hug before him passing away
Each mistakes we earlier pointed out faded away
Only now we knew to lead life fair
And embrace was inform of regular care
Each day I called my father
he used to say why do you bother ?
I expressed it's a blessing rather
Grateful for the beautiful life granted by my father
He worked so hard to bring us up and progress
He lost his health in process
But always had a smiling face
He is safe now without pain in God's embrace!!!
©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath
17 June 2025
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