Wednesday 1 May 2024

55.Seasonal impact and changes/ old memories


*Seasonal impact and changes/ old memories *


For her season is beyond the climate 


In this school named life , she met a classmate 


They shared the same stationary and bench


Shared laughter, aspirations and lunch 


Attending class and Sharing smile 


Although they were located away by miles 


It was the First day of may , rainy and cool 


When he decided to change the school 


He would have new friends and story 


Hope the friendship  doesn't end up being just a memory 


She kept writing him letter 


But with technology emails seemed better 


Certain memories are linked to season 


When rain falls , she also feel teary eyed for other reason 


The season changed so did the climate 


And one day their  path crossed fate 


She missed those innocent warm letter tale


Just as letter writing was replaced by email 


Now the connections meet up even with advanced technology fails 


So she now knows that people too are like season and phase 


She can't expect the same warmth as the very base 


When they were younger they connected more 


Now the priority is different at core 


She likes to re- live those memories which brought the best in her


He motivated her to be a poet , writer and confident speaker 


As they parted away she wanted a last hug with passion 


He was a stranger now and left without expression 


She doesn't know his side of story deep


She just realises that it's time to take a leap 


She loved him but but realised late 


Fresh season has opened her love gate 


With changing season the memories peeled


She overcame her emotions and now has completely healed !!!


✍️ Priyanka kamath

1 st May 2024


Feedback 

Wow

Seasonal change 

Defined 

With the very, changes in life

Very well done!!!

A very different write up 

A different league


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That's good. Can write with deeper emotions.

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