*Beat the Summer*
Heat of summer is a grace
As it's external in any case
But the challenge is dealing with internal battle
neither particular season can calm nor cooling bottle
I received a review at workplace that I am not social
But I find myself with smiling face ,short talks with all
It's true that I am moody and generally carried away by emotions
To be consistent I prefer to be constant unlike various season
I understood that enough opportunities were missed because I speak less
Public speaking is where I don't feel at stress
But that skill of open mic doesn't work in all case
When I feel too heated up, only warm water is my route
If consumed from fridge I will end up hurting my throat
Like warm water will keep me well irrespective of season
So I should find out a way to keep me cool for all right reason
When I got this feedback I was heated up within
And journaling my feeling was a coolant tin
I understand that just like everyone has different way to beat the heat
I should accept the feedbacks gracefully , and overcome all defeat!!!
✍️ Priyanka Kamath
8th May 2024
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Alluring❤️
Brilliantly portrayed your thoughts that summers are a blessing compared to dealing with the challenges of internal conflicts. Beautifully emphasised your point with examples .Ended with beautiful conclusion that everyone has different ways of dealing with their problems, and everyone should accept feedback with humility❤️
Keep penning
Keep rocking ❤️
@Priyanka Kamath
@Priyanka Kamath You have depicted your emotions compared to the heat of summer. Your personal feelings are genuine which you have gone through. You have made it a bit lengthy according to the lines limit asked. ❄ ❄ ❄ ❄
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