Thursday, 16 May 2024

63.life in metro city /Bygone Era/Serendipi-city part 2 of 2

 


*Serendipi-city*


She ticked the wish list for an  adventurous day


And decided to explore public transport her own way 


New in county , too innocent with no net pack 


To have basic transport card, knowledge she lack 


She was visiting her first office first time 


And she was already late and still she seems to be fine 


As she stood tall in amidst the bus stop


She was offered lift too by a cop 


When one bus arrives ,she was unsure to get in 


A young man who learned her destination nodded to fit in 


Now the bus was taking another route 


And she wanted to fight with this man and turn him mute 


But man said that this was the right bus and he could assist 


Serendipity of events were such unreal mist 


They spoke well and enjoyed the journey at hop


The pathway seemed more interesting than the ultimate stop 


He helped her reach metro Safe 


But had clarity of thought not be friends in any case 


For sure the event was adventurous though a bit risky and foolish 


Serendipi-city....to self explore was one to cherish !!!


✍️ Priyanka Kamath 

16 May 2024


*Bygone Era*

She has done many awkward stuff with no wrong intention 

Bygone era has been a bag of  mix emotions 

Below story of this lady,let's cease

As she goes for her first day in office 

She ticked the wish list for an adventurous day

And decided to explore public transport her own way 

New in county , too innocent with no net pack for 

To have basic transport card, knowledge she lack 

She was visiting her first office first time 

And she was already late and still she seems to be fine 

As she stood tall in amidst the bus stop

She was offered lift too by a cop 

When one bus arrives ,she was unsure to get in 

A young man who learned her destination nodded to fit in 

Now the bus was taking another route 

And she wanted to fight with this man and turn him mute 

But man said that this was the right bus and he could assist 

Serendipity of events were such unreal mist 

They spoke well and enjoyed the journey at hop

The pathway seemed more interesting than the ultimate stop 

He helped her reach metro Safe 

But had clarity of thought not be friends in any case 

For sure the event was adventurous though a bit risky and foolish 

A bygone era to self explore and to cherish !!!


✍️ Priyanka Kamath 

6 Jan 2025


Feedback 

Beautiful, your poem "Bygone Era" captures a personal journey of growth, exploration, and the lessons learned through an adventurous yet risky experience. It creates a sense of nostalgia for simpler times, where innocence and impulsiveness often led to unexpected but memorable encounters. Keep capturing through writing. ❤️❤️


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**Life in Metro city*


When she came across new life in metro city 


Experienced unity in diversity 


Beautiful thing about metro city is presence of metro and bus 


Busy work life is always better than empty mind at fuss


Below experience on her first travel that she proudly own


Didn't even realise how important was common sense as she commutes alone 


She ticked the wish list for an adventurous day


And decided to explore public transport her own way 


New in county , too innocent with no net pack 


To have basic transport card, knowledge she lack 


She was visiting her first office first time 


And she was already late and still she seems to be fine


As she stood tall in amidst the bus stop


She was offered lift too by a cop 


When one bus arrives ,she was unsure to get in 


A young man who learned her destination nodded to fit in 


Now the bus was taking another route 


And she wanted to fight with this man and turn him mute 


But man said that this was the right bus and he could assist 


Serendipity of events were such unreal mist 


They spoke well and enjoyed the journey at hop


The pathway seemed more interesting than the ultimate stop 


He helped her reach metro Safe 


But had clarity of thought not be friends in any case 


For sure the event was adventurous though a bit risky and foolish 


Metro city....to self explore was one to cherish !!!


©️✍️Priyanka Kamath 

16 April 2025


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