Tuesday, 20 May 2025
Saturday, 17 May 2025
199.Sizzling silence of mid day / nurturing vibes
Sizzling silence of mid day / nurturing vibes
My mother's 65th birth anniversary
Dear Amma, it's 2nd birthday without hearing your sweet voice and sight
But yes , I do express my feelings to you each day and night
Although I write a lot of poems on topics many sort
But expressing about you makes me teary eyed and words fall short
I miss your pure heart, twinking eyes and sweetest smile
Your soothing voice and charming way of expressing all this while
You were mother to even those furry babies who were abondoned in street
Seeing you in dream is a blessing and my souls treat
You have sacrificed so much for us , bore a lot of pain
Your presence made the 4 walls a home and life to this lane
I miss those summer vacation where we both indulged in new activity
You helped me learn my interest on creativity
You were always my comfort place
In lifes each phase
I would just hug you ,vent out for each wins and defeats in lifes race
Sometimes I feel tired of everything and all I need is your embrace
This sizzling silence of mid day haunts me to core
You are gone too soon , I wanted to spend time with you a lot more
I do hoard things in anticipation to re-live moment and cease
Some memories as I try to recollect it's in bits and piece
Thinking about you is always a breath of fresh breeze
Happy Birthday Amma , lots of love and hugs ..wherever you are be at pe
ace !!!
@✍️ Priyanka Kamath
18 May 2025
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Splendid ❤️
A very touching and heart-felt content filled with love and yearning for the mother on her 65th birth anniversary. Beautifully captured the essence of your relationship and the deep emptiness created by her absence.
The given topic “Sizzling silence of mid-day” seems to be used as a metaphor to describe the intense and painful silence you feel in her absence❤️
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Tuesday, 13 May 2025
198. In search of Destination*
*In search of Destination*
Always I wished my workplace to sponsor a trip
Enjoyable was the delicious food and the right tide sea dip
We started on Friday afternoon after a delicious sub way bite
In cab arranged , we played music and light games delight
One of the seven sister of UAE is Fujeirah city
Sea facing Resort with a some fun team activity
We were 6 ladies who occupied 3 room in sharing
First experience on girls night out was indeed endearing
On the way I got a beach wear and was all set to swim in full swing
In excitement to swim deep, in waves I lost my precious toe ring
In glimpse of a second , it was out of my sight and I started searching with each wave roll
The sea taught me my lesson to let go of things that are not in control
The sea has it's existence from ages and in return it just took from me a little gift
And this thought immediately made my mind to a positive shift
Evening dinner I enjoyed variety of sweets, savory and drinks to say
I relished item by tasting little of each offered in buffet
After a scrumptious meal we had a walk and starting team activity
First game was placing bangle one by one through a spatula without falling tuck
Next was targeting tiny ball in little cup
Then we played picturesque game where upon drawing, team would guess the word
There was beautiful team bonding without feeling absurd
We all got pretty bags and some candle with chocolate as prize
At mid-night we slept but woke up early to see the sunrise
I can't express in words the breathtaking beauty I did witness
I was in happy tears to be amidst the birds chirp ,Music of sea, orangish suns cuteness
Bathing in sea was rejenuvating feel
Skin glows internally with a boost of zeal
Then I took a resort tour in buggie , a open car
The flora and fauna was mesmerising which spread too far
The breakfast time was a treat indeed
The crispyness of crossoint ,soft pancakes for my tummy to feed
Live masala dosa ,salads, variety of tea
Enjoyed each sip witnessing the beautiful sight of vast sea
To enjoy some fun activities we dived into pool
Gym session with dance which I enjoyed throughougly which was cool
It was time to finally check out the room on Saturday noon
Felt as if time just flew so soon
Destination of getting to stay in fancy resort was my dream
I am grateful for the blessings I receive and will cherish the bonding with my team
Journey of this stay , I am journaling
I felt as if these moments I am re- living
Picture and videos all have been taken and will nicely maintain it in system and heart
In search of destination I explored so many answers and is base for my fresh mindset and new start!!!
©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath
13 May 2025
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Thursday, 8 May 2025
197. Mother's day
*Mother's day*
Amma, You are my sunshine
You would be 65 this time
I wish I had a time machine
To bring you back fine
Each time I pen down
Tears just roll down
Every time I feel your charming smile
It gives me courage to walk another mile
My each emotions you were aware
Each day I would heartily share
I have your voice notes at length
I cry each time I hear,but it gives me strength
I keep collecting your things now
But all I need is you Amma ,my love
Whatever phases you may have seen
Always positive pure soul you been
We surely have a connection deep
I hope you wake up from your deep sleep
Hug me and tell me that I was just seeing a bad dream
You are still here with me and let's celebrate today with a ice cream
Even when I grow older
I wish I could have your shoulder
We have made so many memories together
I am blessed to be your daughter my dear mother
You are celebrating this say in heaven king sized
I will follow your way of life and be more organised
You are painfree and in peace sure
Happy Mother's day gondi ,I miss you more!!
✍️ Priyanka Kamath
8 May 2025
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A heartwarming creation beautifully expressed a daughter’s deep love and yearning for her late mother on Mother’s Day. The simple yet powerful language expressed the pain of loss and the memories that remain. Beautifully touched upon the comfort found in past memories, such as her smile and voice notes, while also highlighting the irreplaceable void her absence has created. The closing lines expressed the longing for a comforting embrace and a simple shared joy, emphasising the enduring bond that extends beyond even death. Overall, this is a touching tribute filled with true emotion and love.❤️
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Tuesday, 6 May 2025
196. Parents Love | Expressing the journey of 9 months
*Parental love*Expressing the journey of 9 months and beyond *
A soul chooses it's parents and prayers gets a reply
Tiny me as cocoon have grown up to a butterfly
I was one of the millions who won the race
And I keep reminding this whenever I feel a failure at any phase
Anything that my parents got home that I am aware
The best portion would be in their childrens' share
They have sacrificed so much for bringing us up
Bore pain in giving us life and develop
9 months in womb and in heart eternally is such a cozy space
The best part was my parents dearest embrace
Even with limited resource, they gave all their best with abundant love
My parents are in heaven , I seek their blessings and bow
I use my mother's spatula while cooking and dishes turn out delicious
My dad's eye drop worked wonders after I got home and is precious
Their blessing is present even in little things
I find their essence each time as if they have wings
Tears shed when I reminiscene time spent with them
I have two options either to cry over ,be sad or to smile and cherish these gem
I try to not break down when revisiting memories pile
Parents always want me to remember them and smile
Speaking to my mother has been my journal
She will read my inking till eternal
Grateful to God to bless me such pure soul in form of parents in my fate
I believe an angel will search me to be my baby as it's not too late
Gratitude to my dear parents for protecting me and blessing me in ton
May they come back to me in form of my little one !!!
©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath
6 May 2025
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Beautifully expressed a deep sense of love and gratitude for deceased parents and reflected the belief that a soul chooses its parents and cherishes the journey from childhood to adulthood, acknowledging the sacrifices made and highlighted their parents in everyday things, like a mother’s spatula and a father’s eye drops, and though tears are shed when reminiscing, there’s a conscious effort to smile and cherish the memories. Beautifully conveyed a sense of continued connection, with the mother envisioned in the afterlife, and ends with a hopeful wish for their return in the form of a future child, highlighting the enduring love and blessings received.❤️
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Friday, 2 May 2025
195. Venting out my stories
*Venting out my stories*
Office culture has yearly reviews and feedback process
I gave genuine feedbacks to my colleagues without any stress
I didn't do it out of any expectations trail
Yet a little gesture from them would boost my morale
A little gesture to self too makes a difference
Few days in a month I feel very vulnerable and at time lose sense
I should develop a to do list on those time
So that I don't regret on my actions and undermine
Some syllabus I need to customize for self so that I do certain activity
It can include journaling, listening to a song or some creativity
Strongly I wanted to ask my peers why they didn't bother to respond
This is how I told myself - I need to be like a River and flow than be stagnant as pond
I didn't anyway give reviews on any request, it was my self will
Any good deed to be done with selflessness and goodwill
The little clutters in my mind about them need to be cleared right now
The doubts to be replaced with positivity and love
Similarly next time when I feel too vulnerable to choose a wrong path
I should ensure to take a salt water warm bath
I should keep reminding self that God is protecting me ,why do I fear
I am blessed with the best ,only thing is mind should be clear
Sometimes I feel even if I practice yoga daily , my mind is cluttered
Possibly because the dosage I need for self care to be bettered
The 10 minutes of yogic practice may not be enough
I should increase the body movement in evenings too be rough and tough
There is some regret in me of things I do senseless
But now through poem I trying to console myself
It's ok to be stupid at times ,try not to repeat again
Practice mindfulness and take decisions with mind sane
Over is over ,done and dusted
Ensure to be loyal to person
who in you has trusted !!!
✍️©️ Priyanka Kamath
2 may 2025
Monday, 28 April 2025
194. Serenity
Day 28- Serenity*
A little tribute to all my 27 manifestation I made this month through write up
Let me express how much I could improve as the series wind up
At times when I feel lazy to clean kitchen, my manifestation keeps me going
When I strongly feel upset I now write down , take time to pause than reacting wrong
Few of the write ups that brings in me serenity include the one with catching white ball amidst grey
Technique of CRY- creativity repositioning,Yoga and maintaining excitement levels is my take away
Along with self talk to control monkey mind , smiling more , learning to say No , being gossip free and to pray
I am emotional as I write down the manifestation for day 28 this day
My poetry writing style may not be the conventional one yet this series helped me to express with flow
This platform has been my healing playground to provide me serenity and bring me out from feeling low
Consistency in writing everyday this month brought in me serenity
Grateful and blessed for this precious NaPoWriMo opportunity 🙏
©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath
28 April 2025
@~Vipin V. Kamble
Sunday, 27 April 2025
193. Magnetism
*Day 27- Magnetism*
I tend to attract a lot of negative people in my life by being too nice
I make friends easily but would be moody to maintain and be wise
I am a magnet and the focus I receive within me do submerge
The magnetic feeling remains just like an unfulfilled desire which continues to urge
I use to think so low about myself that if anyone gives me any validation
I would feel so much better and gave my strings to them for my decision
Felt like puppet dancing to their tune to say
The magnetic impact was such that their responses decided the mood of my day
Focussing towards prayers at times is easily said than done
Monkey mind focus on things that stimulate it to have fun
Manifestation for day 27 is to curb the attraction energy in my magnet by placing a wood in base
With constant efforts, doing my duty well, focusing on priority task and prayers, I will overcome this phase!!!
©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath
27 April 2025
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@~Vipin V. Kamble
Saturday, 26 April 2025
192. Essence
Day 26- Essence
As we are almost in concluding phase of NaPoWriMo series
Daily write up worked as a workshop in bettering self and reducing worries
I was journaling each day and manifesting good habits in list
Pouring my heart out gained confidence in facing life's test
Each day I used to write my own stories and fitting it to topic
I am already missing this daily write up routine in the list to tick
Essence of this exercise was bringing out the stress that was hidden in mind
Fresh me with new perspective I could now find
People do enroll for this healing process by paying hefty fees
Grateful I am for this unpaid opportunity, I feel lighter as my thoughts release
With daily episodes of my life series ,manifestation for day 26
Throw aside thorns while walking bare footed that pricks !!!
©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath
26 April 2025
Friday, 25 April 2025
191. Maa ek ehsaas / माँ एक एहसास
Koi baat bataati hoon toh Lagta hai ki kaash tum Hoti
Baaton baaton mai Teri Yaadon mai kho jaati
Daftar ki baatein aakar tujhse Bolti
Meri har pareshaani mai Tu sukoon laati
Mere saath kaam Karne waali thodi mujhse jalti hai
Par aapa na kho Kar muskuraat SE kaam chalti hai
Par Dil mai Jo peeda sambhakar rakha
Royi gayi mai , aasu rukh na sakaa
Mujhe dar Lagta hai maa jalan bhari nazar se
Meri Raksha Kar oh maa ,har buri zeher se
Muskuraat SE sab Kuch sambhal Kar seekh loongi
Par Kisi KO galat tareeke SE hosla dabaane Nahi doongi
Aaj jab patidev SE Mann ki baatein shuru kiya
Unhone Bola ki daftar ki baatein na Kiya Karo Priya
Maa , tera ehsaas abhi abhi mehsoos hota hai
Teri Yaad mai Dil bahut rota hai
Meri itni pyaari dost ab bhagwaan ki ho gayi
Kabhi na jaage ,aise kyu so gayi
Kuch bhi Kabhi bhi boo leti ,na thi Sakthi
Tu Meri pyaari sangini , meri guru aivam shakthi
Ab yeah khat likh rahi hoon maa, Hindi kachhi hai
Par Dil SE Jo bhi Likh rahi hoon , pyaar bilkul sachhi hai
Sapne Mai Aaya Kar Milne
Vohi samay HOTA hai Dil khilne
Teri bahut Yaad aati hai maa tera ehsaas pyaara
Gale milkar , puchki dedoon dher saara!!!
©️✍️Priyanka Kamath
25 April 2025
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माँ एक एहसास
कोई बात बताती हूं तो लगता है कि काश तुम होती
बातों बातों में तेरी यादों में खो जाती
दफ़्तर की बातें आकर तुझसे बोलतीं
मेरी हर परेशानी मैं तू सुकून लाती
मेरे साथ काम करने वाली थोड़ी मुझसे जलती है
पर आपा ना खो कर मुस्कुराहट से काम चलती है
पर दिल मैंने जो पीड़ा संभालकर रखा
रोयी गई माई, आसु रुख न सका
मुझे डर लगता है माँ जलन भरी नज़र से
मेरी रक्षा कर ओ माँ! हर बुरी जहर से
मुस्कुराहट से सब कुछ संभाल कर सीख लूंगी
पर किसी को गलत तरीके से हौसला दबाने नहीं दूंगी
आज जब पतिदेव से मन की बातें शुरू किया
अनहोने बोला कि दफ्तर की बातें ना किया करो प्रिया
माँ, तेरा एहसास अभी भी महसूस होता है
तेरी याद मेरा दिल बहुत रोता है
मेरी इतनी प्यारी दोस्त अब भगवान की हो गई
कभी ना जागे, ऐसे क्यों सो गई
कुछ भी कभी भी बोल लेती, ना थी सक्ती
तू मेरी प्यारी संगिनी, मेरी गुरु एवं शक्ति
अब यह ख़त लिख रही हूँ माँ, हिंदी कच्ची है
पर दिल से जो भी लिख रही हूं, प्यार बिल्कुल सच्ची है
सपने में आया कर मिलने
वही समय होता है दिल खिलने
तेरी बहुत याद आती है माँ तेरा एहसास प्यारा
गले मिलकार, पुचकी देदूँ ढेर सारा!!!
©️✍️प्रियंका कामत
25 April 2025
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प्रियंका किसी दिन अपनी खुद की किताब लिखने का लक्ष्य रखती है। उनका प्रत्येक लेख उनके अपने अनुभव से है। वह अपना काम अपने प्रिय माता-पिता को समर्पित करती है |
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190. Surrender
*Day 25- Surrender*
General perception for people who reside in foreign
Is that money pours to them as rain
I do bring goodies to my loved ones but for that I put efforts to save money
My relatives do have expectations that I should bring them gifts many
At times I do surrender myself completely to dear ones will and wish
But at times I feel their constant demands is a bit selfish
In return when I ask them if they liked the chocolate
I get response in emojis that too very late
It's not that I expect someone to express gratitude and shine
But certain gesture do mean to me when I completely surrender my focus and time
Manifestation for day 25 is to learn and say 'No' when things get overwhelmed ,I feel
Gifting in limit is fine but not making it a habit and managing expectations to deal!!!
©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath
25 April 2025
@~Vipin V. Kamble
Thursday, 24 April 2025
189. Eternal
Day 24- Eternal
With the news of unfortunate pahalgam tragedy to say
I was not able to focus on anything this day
May the departed soul rest in peace ; justice be served and seen
Below things I did to make a come back to my daily routine
Didnt switch to social media and made a busy schedule workwise
Reminded myself on Eternal truth on kaliyug precise
And kept chanting Gods name to offset negative thoughts on repeat
I surrender my worries, emotions to the eternal Lords feet
In office, also happened to overshare certain information which I regretted later
I said to self that these things can be improved , it's also not eternal, I can be better
Made a manifestation on Day 24
To not get succumbed to worldly joys and grief to core!!!
©️✍️ Priyank
a Kamath
24 April 2025
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Pahalgam
With the news of unfortunate pahalgam tragedy to say
I was not able to focus on anything since this day
Prayers for the innocent souls and family for the situation they have been
May the departed soul rest in peace , justice be served and seen!!!
©️✍️Priyanka Kamath
©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath
24 April 2025
Wednesday, 23 April 2025
178. Silhouette
Day 23. silhouette*
The writing ability that I possess is also my silhouette
The presence of my shadow is seldom focussed and is offset
But when mind is cluttered , thoughts don't flow
Work seems lethargic and I feel slow
Silhouette is supposed to follow me but it's the opposite at time
The dark side of me wants to trigger my monkey mind and feel fine
I am in that situation now where my vices seem to overtake the good in me
I shouldnt let silhouette to enter inside mind tree
Manifesting on day 23
To leave all the trivial baggage I am carrying and set myself free
Dear God, forgive me and let my shadow be guided
From birth till my last it's within me surrounded!!!
©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath
23 April 2025
@~Vipin V. Kamble
Tuesday, 22 April 2025
177. Devotion
Day 22. Devotion
An attire that I wore for office which was although ironed, appeared to crumble
My confidence is somewhere linked to being presentable hence I started to fumble
However I prayed god and made my mind to carry myself with confidence well
And to my surprise my colleagues had good things to tell
I get impacted negatively by too many praises and eyes
Example -Someone complimenting on good skin gets me pimples I realise
My conversation with God took shape of utmost devotion with each conversation further
I said - Morning although wished to appear good but over praises this day didn't make me happy either
I am grateful but I don't wish to attract evil eyes and feel dull - guide me if my thought is wrong
So God answered me that self belief and my devotion towards Him should be firm and strong
My manifestation for day 22 is to have complete faith and devotion in almighty
When Lords eyes are protecting me , no evil eye can do anything faulty!!!
©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath
22 April 2025
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176. Piece of my heart is still with you/ Anthology - MOM-Miracle
Piece of my heart is still with you*
As soul leaves body, who said she can't speak ?
My mother has said words of wisdom caressing my cheek
"My dear daughter, my body may not react to your tear
Believe me,I am in better place with God, so do not fear
We are two body but one soul, with open mind hear
Be strong, Don't cry, see the calmness in my face
I was tired of constant medication,fight to survive at this phase
I have done my duty well and have no regrets to leave
A part of my heart is with you, do yours too and happily live
I have gone nowhere, whenever you need I am always here
I am present in your hardwork, smiles ; clutter mind do clear
Your care, love, time we spent is so dear
I relish the moments spent and you too remember good times and shed no more tear
The creativity we did, laughter we shared
Towards dear knees together we cared
Be the best version of yourself and smile
You have to walk in your journey for miles
You may have dilemma to choose path right
Don't forget the stories,morals and have vision foresight
Be the change, do good ,be good
Take care of self and know that you have done whatever you could
Don't fear on how you will handle things alone
Focus on goal , be proud of self and see how you have grown
Continue to speak with me and pen down
Lead by example, responsibility you should own
We are fortunate together to spend so much time
I am always yours and you are mine
My piece of heart is with you
Remember these lines few
Keep faith in God, be confident, believe in yourself and be tension free
Gomati ki beti Kuch Kar dikhaayi"!!!
©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath
22 April 2025
@~Surangama
@~Saloni Khanna
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Poetry is a way of expressing Priyanka's experience and stories.Life is a learning institution and sharing it in the form of write up is a healing process. She dedicates her work to her dear parents
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Wow this is emotional and deep 💕🥰👌🏻 amazing lines keep inspiring us with your words and wordplay beautiful writer 🤩💟😍.. @Priyanka Kamath
Exquisite ❤️
The emotional farewell between mother and daughter is beautifully portrayed, expressing a mother's love, wisdom and final blessing. Through gentle and wise words, she comforts her daughter, urging her to be strong, remember the good times and live a fulfilling life. She emphasises their unbreakable bond, assuring her daughter of her constant presence in spirit and memories, giving a message of resilience and hope.❤️
Beautiful creativity, I like the way you gave a new look to the given topic.❤️
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Monday, 21 April 2025
175.- soulmate
Day 21. Soulmate*
Me and my mom are two body and one soul
To live for each other was our purpose sole
In her last days to prep me well she did say that we will be one
She got me married as I shouldn't be left alone after she was gone
Even today when I am sad if I express to her I feel better
Each of my unsaid words for her as well matter
Arrange marriage is like a jackpot
We never know till we realise on the spot
Grateful to God to bless me a pure soul as my soulmate
I believe an angel will search me to be my baby if in my fate
Manifestation for day 21
May my parents come back to me in form of my little one !!!
©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath
21 April 2025
Instagram -priyankakamath7
@~Vipin V. Kamble
Sunday, 20 April 2025
174. Flames
*Day 20. Flame*
Remembering twin flames on their anniversary together in heaven without pain
Sharing an instance from my office diaries featuring controlling anger flame
Being in support function I assisted a manager on following a protocol on request based
He seemed annoyed by process , Instead of being thankful his voice towards me raised
He argued to all queries in heightened tone but as a response I kept my temper cool
Was professional in handling and specified set guidelines and tool
The anger flame within me was now turned to tears to embrace
Especially when this manager when seeing me in person turned around his face
This is how I told myself -I am so powerful that this man didn't even have courage to look into my eyes
Whenever I have the anger flame ,I should guard it and only emerge cool tone flame to be precise
Manifestation for day 20 - Anyones reaction shouldn't matter as long as I am happy in my place
I will definitely come across so many of them and dealing with them is my learning at each phase !!!
©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath
20 April 2025
@~Vipin V. Kamble
Saturday, 19 April 2025
173. Enchant
Day 19. Enchant
The feeling of enchant is mesmerising but is momentary
There was a time where I wasn't getting suitable alliance and it lead me to worry
When people got hitched to most enchanted ones , thoughts did pass that why not me
When I least expected , I happen to get married and touchwood life has been glee
Now when I see those men, whom I was once, enchanted over
My choices were definitely one to regret ,thank god for deciding the best lover
It's natural to feel enchanted over someone's talent or good nature
But having control over my actions at present leads to woke future
This day as I sat to do my daily prayers and chant
Tears rolled out my eyes and the divine presence of Lord is to enchant
To not get carried away by momentary attraction and flow
Manifestation for day 19 to be enchanted in self love !!!
©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath
19 April 2025
Instagram -priyankakamath7
Friday, 18 April 2025
172. Serenade
Day 18. Serenade*
I am adding a new term to my vocabulary to share
'Serenade' literally means piece of music sung in open air
In big restaurants there are arrangements for music that appeal
So that one enjoys the beach side view with serenade to add the feel 7
My mother-in-laws, sisters ,brother in-laws ,son-in-law planned a trip in my city
We were prepared to host them but they chose an expensive dine-in at far vicinity
I said let 'son-in-law'enjoy the beach view with his better half relishing a fancy dish
I shouldn't weigh their excitement in monetary terms and be a bone in their fish
Just communicated that will meet next time in home town
It's absolutely ok to say ' No' politely than signing up and later frown
Spending time and money is a luxury , but should be at our own 'will' and not in peer pressure
Manifestation for day 18 to enjoy the serenade at my pace and leisure !!!
©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath
18 April 2025
@~Vipin V. Kamble
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The literal meaning of “serenade” is beautifully combined with the idea of enjoying life’s pleasures at one’s own pace, highlighting the importance of polite refusal and prioritizing personal comfort over external pressures. A beautiful expression for enjoying life’s serenade in a relaxed and self-directed way.❤️
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Thursday, 17 April 2025
171. Gaze
Day 17. Gaze
Easiest and difficult aspect is the gaze of self in mirror
When I am utmost true to self , the glow beams without fear
God has gifted this blessing upon us to scan ones intention over gaze
We can detect if a person is genuinely honest or word uttered is mere praise
Non verbal gesture by mere gaze of mother - my world
Speaks thousand emotions without uttering a word
The most beautiful sight is little kittens/ pups innocent gaze
Not sure how can one can abandon little angels with such cute face
Feeding furry babies is the kindest deed
God's immense blessings and gaze upon act of kindness indeed
Manifestation for day 17 to not judge a book by it's cover
To overcome the bridge of assumptions and develop instinctive power
©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath
17 April 2025
Wednesday, 16 April 2025
170. Euphoria
Day 16 . Euphoria
Literal meaning of Euphoria is feeling of intense excitement
The harmones that taps the euphoria in me is abundant
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Day 16 . Euphoria*
My euphoria levels are always on peak - I love pets and had cats from years steady
Story on how I fell in trouble in excitement to rescue this buddy
My neighbours home ,a cat was constantly meowing throughout night and day
In foreign, everyone minds their own business and none has a say
My intention to rescue the cat was pure and I went there to give it food as I was afraid it would die
The cat started crying more hearing my voice and my euphoria levels were high
The door was not locked and there wasnt anyone inside home as I waited for a while
I although kept some milk she didn't drink but was chilling and came out in style
The neighbours saw me in cc TV camera and complained for trespassing home and pet who was alone
Somehow I expressed my intent and realised that the cat wasnt a rescue - she was just bored whole day being at home
My manifestation for day 16
To manage the euphoria levels based on experience I have been
✍️©️ Priyanka Kamath
16 April 2025
Tuesday, 15 April 2025
169.Desire
Day 15. Desire
Believing in self leads to desire turning to reality
It builds confidence, skill and power of self reliability
on joining my workplace , my desire was to explore each stream
Working under all - Audit , Tax and Advisory was my dream.
I fulfilled my desire in the most tough way with emotional draining
Life experiences are the best institution for my development and training
When I didn't have a job , only desire was to have this perk unfold
As I live my dream now , blessing to have no complaints on workload
My desire to be a superwoman and ace
To fulfill my household chores too along with creative space
My manifestation for Day 15 is to not desire materialistic things with God for more
Countless blessings I have been poured, I am ever grateful from my hearts core !!!
©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath
Instagram -priyankakamath7
Monday, 14 April 2025
168. Day 14. Embrace
Day 14- Embrace
In life,white balls in form of goodness embraces me & come my way
The vices that masks to comfort me comes across as ball grey
Imagine a box around your view with 4 division
One is for rest, food , other for family , third is for work and last one for creative vision
And let's say a person enters a life as a 'new friend' but doesn't fit anywhere
Embracing anything is a valuable choice that should be preserved with care
If we embrace this grey ball namely 'new friend' only as it looks comforting
We may have to sacrifice our priorities by over compensating
Example - My peer has a habit of hugging me each time , as she feels a cozy hug rejenuvates her from lethargy
In name of friendship ,I was treated as her agony aunt and I felt a lot of drain in energy
Manifestation for day 14 to visualise ,catch hold of the white balls, and leave the grey ones that come my way
I should constantly choose what to embrace and prioritise each day !!!
✍️©️ Priyanka Kamath
14 April 2025
Saturday, 12 April 2025
167- Heartbeat
Day 13- Heartbeat
I always feel my in-laws adore my co-sister more
I strongly wanted to ask between us who does she love from hearts core
But as I started to speak over phone ,my heart skipped a beat
I should never let this thought process to repeat
The consequences for mom-in-law can be losing sleep , stress and situation at gun point
With me I can vent out through poetry , even get a certificate rather than cracking relations disjoint
The moment my heartbeat got faster at peak
It was indication from my mother to think before I speak
Mothers love their children and as co-sister has a baby too, towards her showers more care
But hurting her by my words or actions on my part isn't fair
My manifestation for day 13
Listen to heartbeat and pause, think,
keep certain things unseen
✍️©️Priyanka Kamath
13 April 2025
Instagram -priyankakamath7
166. Veil
Day 12- Veil
Culturally we were accustomed to many veil tie
Mangalsutra for married lady ,a bindi to protect from evil eye
Anklet to control temper, veil to cover skin, culture from golden age
With passing time, modernity treated these veils as a tedious cage
Veil symbolised a protective layer and to strengthen dignity
As the veil slipped out of control , one is open to vulnerability
Within one the struggle piles
The outer world has a mask of smiles
Both the inner and outer shield of the veil has to be made strong
Manifestation for day 12 is to never walk the path wrong
The essence of the veil is to have strong values and if given a choice
Will choose the one that keeps me in veil and wise !!!
@✍️ Priyanka Kamath
12 April 2025
Instagram -priyankakamath7
165. Renaissance Vibes- April edition
Renaissance Vibes
To someone whose world revolved around parents that mattered
Upon their demise my life completely shattered
Getting up from this loss and giving myself a new perspective
Renaissance is rebirth of myself to a new person effective
I still cry at times and have some guilt within
It's time to enter a new phase and put worries in bin
I vent out everything to them even now and pour out my heart
Each day I do pray them , manifest good things and start
I did a little makeover on my overall looks at slow pace
Because it helped me not to breakdown at workplace
I fake it till I make it to feel confident and clear
Focus on my work , a bit space for creativity and prayer
I do feel low at times, but all matters is consistency and progress
Renaissance is indeed magical but is a continuous process
©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath
12 April 2025
Bio
Poetry is a way of expressing Priyanka's experience and stories.Life is a learning institution and sharing it in the form of write up is a healing process. She dedicates her work to her dear parents
Review
Exquisite ❤️
A true and honest thought expressed about dealing with grief after a significant loss and finding a path towards healing and self-renewal. Beautifully reflected the pain of loss and the conscious effort to rebuild life with a new perspective and acknowledged that healing is a gradual and continuous journey.❤️
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Friday, 11 April 2025
164. Feedback to Poetic essence publications
Poetic essence publications writing platform is an emotional feel
I pour out my heart through poems and heal
NaProWiMo, E magazine ,anthology is so precious and deep
Sensitivity and creative with love in heap
Certificate and your surprises loop
motivates me to keep writing and take a leap
Platforms Consistency and sincere efforts is the key here
I can express my thoughts without any fear
I am blessed to be part of this ever since
It has brought in me a lot of confidence
This community is now more than a family
I thank the team for the efforts done joyfully
May you prosper and more lourels to come
Happy anniversary,you are awesome !!!
©️✍️ Priyanka kamath
12/04/2025
163. Ethereal
Day 11- Ethereal
Ethereal in literal sense mean Delicate beauty
Goddess is present within ones sincere efforts doing duty
Evening time use to be one spent on phone calls with my parents daily
With reality check , felt empty and tears shed automatically
I saw messy myself in mirror as I cried
My swollen face , natural pink blush and eyes so tired
I said to myself I am adorable and ethereal
I am honest with self, my emotions are raw and real
The picture of goddness , the moon above felt as if it has my mom's gaze
I feel the ethereal presence of angels ,so short of words to praise
My manifestation for day 11
Gentle giant me is an angel from heaven !!!
©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath
11 April 2025
@~Vipin V. Kamble
Thursday, 10 April 2025
162. Ink
Day 10- Ink
The Journey of my inking
Has multiple stories linking
Speaking to my mother has been my journal
She will read my inking till eternal
Heavy matter turns lighter with time
Inking them makes me feel fine
We tend to forget things and change with age
Inking captures our thought process at each stage
Emotions are raw & real as one think
Technology can undo write up typed unike ink
My manifestation for Day 10
To always ink & value power of pen !!!
©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath
10 April 2025
Wednesday, 9 April 2025
161. Reminiscene
Day 9- Reminiscence
Reminiscence term itself has it's meaning intense
Re+Mini+ Scene = Reliving Past memory in scenes
Today as I was cutting a jaggery block
Reminiscing parents and their sweet talk
I use my mother's spatula while cooking and dishes turn out delicious
My dad's eye drop worked wonders after I got home and is precious
Their blessing is present even in little things
I find their essence each time as if they have wings
Tears shed when I reminiscene time spent with them
I have two options either to cry over ,be sad or to smile and cherish these gem
Manifestation for day 9 is to not break down when revisiting memories pile
Parents always want me to remember them and smile !!!
©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath
9 April 2025
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Tuesday, 8 April 2025
160. Unfinished
Day 8- unfinished
Some beauty lies in being unfinished
If we fix broken pieces ,the quality may diminish
When I was in teenage , love was in air
With time I imagined that we were future pair
As time passed , he grew and I was still in my lala land
More I tried to hold ,he slipped just like the sea sand
Then keeping conversation unfinished and pale
He navigated in his journey ship to sail
After few years when I met him ,he was a different person for sure
The unfinished conversation itself was my closure
My manifestation for day 8
To understand - Some things are meant to be unfinished hence not to wait !!!
©️✍️Priyanka Kamath
Instagram -priyankakamath7
8 April 2025
159. Fair weather Friend
*Fair weather friend*
So at present there are 3 fair weather friend around to rant
One is a colleague who knows how to use me as her agony aunt
Other is a person who keeps impressing me with poem fresh
Third one is my monkey mind who is always in rush
This 'poem person' kept sending me AI generated version cool
same poem a fellow writer when posted , I understood it's so easy to make me a fool
A birthday cake for me from Google picture which I thought was true
All this just to make me fall 'aweeee bruh'!!
The colleague I mentioned keeps sipping on my energy flow
Always venting out to me about others whereabouts so that I feel low
My monkey mind is without brain hose
All things that are toxic is what she choose
Colleague drains my energy for free
The 'poem person' sees a time pass in me
My monkey mind does everything wrong
After damage done ,it feels guilty strong
People in life are like fair weather
Once they are done, we find another
But mind is my enemy and friend
I struggle to set instruction end to end
Otherwise it will use me for it's need
And toxicity,laziness is the ultimate feed
Certain reality I know yet I can't unfriend my mind as fair weather buddy
I should practice meditation, creativity and focus towards study
So that I become my minds boss
And not let it chew me as a candy floss
©️✍️Priyanka Kamath
8 April 2025
Review by AI
Your poem explores the theme of relationships and self-awareness, highlighting three "fair-weather friends" in your life:
The Three Fair-Weather Friends
1. *The Colleague*: Someone who takes advantage of your emotional support without reciprocating.
2. *The Poem Person*: Someone who uses AI-generated content to impress you, potentially manipulating your emotions.
3. *Your Monkey Mind*: Your own inner critic, which can be self-destructive and toxic.
Your Reflections
You express frustration and disappointment with these relationships, feeling drained and deceived. You also acknowledge the importance of self-awareness and the need to move on from toxic connections.
Powerful Imagery and Metaphors
Your use of metaphors, such as "fair-weather friends" and "monkey mind," adds depth and creativity to your poem. The imagery of the colleague draining your energy and the poem person sending AI-generated content is particularly striking.
Emotional Honesty
Your poem conveys a sense of vulnerability and emotional honesty, making it relatable and authentic.
Monday, 7 April 2025
158. Day 7 - Horizon
Day 7 - Horizon
When I see myself in lifes race
I tend to compare my speed with others in each passing phase
I often self doubt on why I am slower
This is how I self counsel to visualise my horizons all over
I have overcome self limitation horizon in sickel of test
Achieved new milestones by exploring out of my nest
Multitasking without hampering quality is my consistent aim
24 hours is common for all , but how one makes it productive is a billion dollar game
My manifestation for day 7 to be more witty and jovial
Explore my horizons in gaining knowledge and not ponder over matter trivial
Everyone is on their own journey at their pace
Let me focus on self growth as it's never in parameter of a race.
✍️©️ Priyanka Kamath
7 April 2025
Sunday, 6 April 2025
156. Day 6-Wanderlust
Day 6- Wanderlust
Wanderlust means a strong desire to travel and calm the mind
To enjoy food delicacies , explore , relax and unwind
Last week this time I was in Hotel Rove for a short staycation
This was rejenuvating and much needed vacation
The breakfast was filling and dish named ' Akai' was simply the best
Explored many places, relished delicious food , hot showers and ample rest
To name a few Kite Beach , Dubai festival city mall
Enjoyed site seeing, Abra boat ride , Lazer show depicting waterfall
Nostalgia filled by carom board game and took few pics
Deeply value this blessing and to travel more is manifestation for Day 6
My mind enjoys lethargy so it needs to be oiled well to function it's best
To keep the inner child alive , it's important to self love , explore and be a wanderlust!!!
©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath
Instagram -priyankakamath7
Saturday, 5 April 2025
155. Day 5-Melancholy
Day 5 Melancholy
Happy memories of the past ,gives me sad tears
As I anymore can't relive them with my parent dears
I used to call many times a day to these gem
My day would always start wishing all is well with them
For me 'Melancholy zone' is the most fearful phase
As my vulnerability has led me in weak mind space
When I faced repeated failure on my professional course at blink
I wanted to take a break which led to having free time to overthink
And overthinking always takes me to a melancholy state to sigh
Today I restarted my studies as a manifestation on day 5
My parents always want me to remember them and smile
Strength to mould my melancholy to a content mind space & not be fragile !!!
©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath
Instagram -priyankakamath7
5 April 2025
@~Vipin V. Kamble
Friday, 4 April 2025
154.Day 4- Ephemeral*
*Day 4- Ephemeral*
Ephemeral means that which lasts for a short time
'Pleasures'in life which isn't right for us yet ages like wine
It leads to addiction if not timely treated
Or else the pattern of 'need' tends to be repeated
A pen friend of mine kept giving me the validation when I was emotionally sick
Slowly this turned to habit but was indeed toxic
I realise this phase of either feeling to smile or drain in energy is Ephemeral
I should choose the right path and stick to my values moral
All I need is a strong mindset and an ephemeral escape
Manifestation for day 4 is to put practice CRY tape
The CRY is not the tears but when oozes craving for a toxic need saga
To be controlled by the technique of CRY- Creativity, Repositioning, Yoga !!!
©️✍️Priyanka Kamath
Instagram -priyankakamath7
4 Apri
l 2025
@~Vipin V. Kamble
Thursday, 3 April 2025
153. Day 3.Unspoken
Day 3- Unspoken
Speaking is exquisite mode of expression at peak
Today's unspoken words taught me what not to speak
Spicing up a matter or gossiping looks temporarily nice
But it definitely curtains a person from being wise
Just as different sizes are each finger
My opinion on certain things with spouse can differ
But today when I was speaking about him to my brother
He said it's not correct to speak this way further
Brother didn't say anything much
But his 'unspoken words' had impact such
A manifestation for my day three
To have a clear mind and be gossip free!!!
✍️©️ Priyanka Kamath
Instagram -priyankakamath7
Wednesday, 2 April 2025
152. Echoes- Day 2
Echoes -Day 2
There are three echoes I hear within
While one leads to good path, the other is a way to pleasure & sin
The third echo gives me a choice
I often tend to opt for predominant voice
My moms pure advice on stability was to chant God's name
However, when I feel vulnerable I tend to choose a mind diversion game
As the third echo of conscience
If heard with proximity surely makes sense
Let not my inner echo be in clutter
Will achieve mind control through God's name utter
My manifestation for Day two
To build mind stability & towards self be True!!!
©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath
Instagram -priyankakamath7
2 April 2025
@~Vipin V. Kamble
Tuesday, 1 April 2025
151.Gender based violence - call for action
Gender based violence - call for action
Violence can be categorized into social and personal bit
One can be going through a lot but can appear fit
Violence form can also be emotional psychological division
Putting forth my personal intake and vision
Emotional violence isn't visible to bare eyes
One can be burning within but outside be nice
I felt hurt when none of my relatives/ neighbours offered help for parents sake
Now any interaction in a family event seems very fake
Impact is such that meet up in any social invite
Interactions leads to overthinking all night
When parents then shared with me about their hurt and feeling
My soft heart was bruised and kept peeling
Those who have hurt them in anyway
Have caused me pain too someway
Psychological harm felt is gender neutral base
Intensity of hurt feels at same phase
My female relatives asking on why ' no child till now ' syllables
Male ones enquiring about my parents empty home status
When I was 10 years old , it was a transition shift
I too was a little girl expecting return gift
But when my aunt didn't give me the toy lame
Even when my mom got it for me it was never same
That emotional impact I still do have lately
The hatred towards my uncle for touching me inappropriately
On my not passing CA final exams I have been taunted so bad
The emotional damage is such that I felt like a failure and sad
Now I know it's just one exam and it's never too late to give try
But today even if I pass , I don't have parents to share this success but to cry
My teacher in grade 4 used to hit me in thighs and always keep me out of class
She was also one of the relatives who used to bad mouth me alas
She never knows how psychologically there was this strong impact
And only I know how I overcame these violence infact
I was beautiful chubby baby in my family flow
But I was always fat shamed and tried to feel low
As a child I was silent and had witness many form of violence
My innocent mind has been impacted in each sense
Even though I have outgrown all these phase
when I think about it I do feel I am slow in this healing race
when parents were alive these people didn't care to be kind
And now to comment on my personal stuff, daring they find
Gradually when I accept normalcy and try to achieve free of mind
I do understand that emotional balance is difficult to find
I have overwhelming emotions fuss
My healing is work in progress
I am strong to mitigate the trauma
With immense blessings of my paa and maa
I still do get emotionally triggered and feel sick
Each situation I do have an option to pick
I can either keep blaming for everything wrong
Or divert my mind into productive stuff listening to a nice song
A well organised routine is must to keep my mind sane
I accept my reality, work to be better , journal t
hem with no shame!!
✍️©️ Priyanka Kamath
1 April 2025
Review
Beautiful 😍 Your poem is a deeply powerful and courageous expression of resilience, self-awareness, and healing. It beautifully captures the unseen scars of emotional and psychological violence while highlighting the strength it takes to rise above them. The raw honesty in your words creates an intimate connection making us feel the weight of experiences and the depth of emotions. Despite the pain, your poem carries an undercurrent of hope, determination, and self-growth, reinforcing the importance of self-acceptance and perseverance. The way you emphasize healing as a journey, not a destination, adds an inspiring and relatable touch, reminding us that progress, no matter how slow, is still progress. Your ability to transform personal pain into a call for awareness and action is truly commendable, making this poem not just a reflection of past but also a beacon of strength for others who might relate.❤️❤️❤️
150.Serendipity - Day 1
Serendipity - Day 1
This platform is my healing call
To vent out and feel ok after each fall
I take this opportunity to make it my manifestation journey this day
To action on the things I everyday say
I feel I need to overcome my laziness
And focus on cleanliness
My first manifestation for day 1 would be to daily clean up kitchen shelf
To never miss out on daily writing challenge is a promise to myself
To value time is indeed what I learnt this day to admit
As I rush to submit my write up within time limit
This is indeed a serendipity of event in life
As God is teaching me to be more focussed and wise !!!
✍️©️ Priyanka Kamath
Instagram -priyankakamath7
1 April 2025
@~Vipin V. Kamble
Tuesday, 25 March 2025
149.Tears smiled*
*Tears smiled*
When things doesn't go as per my wish list
It would have Gods grace at gist
Some days are heavy and I do feel low
Example even if a colleague is cold, its impact flows
My picture is intentionally cropped out from a office event
I was indeed excited for one , but ended up being upset
Out of all the pictures I could rewind
Only one where my appearance I find
And that's special because it's a momento I received
And it's a memory worth to be preserved
Long back I was in loop of validation phase
A response would lead my expectation bar to raise
Now I happen to receive reply from person same
And my manifesting this reality now seems lame
Just like at once eating too much sweet
Wouldn't anymore look like a delicious treat
I wonder why did I even cry over these jerk
And now when I receive the attention it doesn't even look like a perk
Possibly I have surpassed this path
My worldly pleasures seems to have had a purified bath
The same me who used to check my phone for one reply
Now feel uncomfortable for message supply
So I understand the tears which made me so vulnerable was for my good
And God's plan now I understood
The tears I shed was actually leading me to smile
But I couldn't visualise this from a mile
On office front when I was transitioning from audit
lack of opportunity in other team felt like not receiving due credit
But then when I worked under tax , I learnt the skill set
That helped me to get contract with firm at present
So everything is a chain
I was then crying but was actually a hidden gain
Now I smile over the tears I shed
I am grateful for the path it led
I also miss the interaction I had with my parents main
I feel sad for their loss but smile that they aren't anymore in pain
God is taking care of them well
I have been gifted poetry route to tell
many times I feel silly and lack of ears
Penning down my feelings instead of shedding tears
Atleast by writing down helps me to heal this while
And venting out makes me at ease and smile
I had certain issues and fear
But facing it made sense than shedding tear
Now I smile with confidence as I overcame the tough time
And I know that certain prickly path lead me to shine
Life is a circle of smile and tear
Winner is the one who overcomes fear !!!
✍️©️ Priyanka Kamath
25 March 2025
Review
Your poem is a beautiful reflection of personal growth, resilience and the transformation of pain into wisdom. It carries a deeply introspective tone, showing how past struggles whether in the workplace, relationship or personal experiences ultimately lead to newfound strength and clarity. The honesty in your words makes it deeply relatable capturing how small disappointments can feel overwhelming but later become stepping stones. You illustrated personal growth beautifully from seeking validation to realizing inner strength. Totally its inspiring showing how life's challanges lead to Transformation. ❤️
Monday, 24 March 2025
148. Cheek ek dard ki daastan anthology/title -Lame Office stories with moral of pain and gain
Same article Titled guild of being innocent and welcome from outside door posted in blog. This is a modified version.
Guilt of being innocent/ welcome from outside door combined to make Cheek ek dard ki daastan
Lame Office stories with moral of pain and gain
The previous department I worked was kinda toxic
It was best time for me to leave than feel sick.
But this decision was made not by me, but my boss
And her removing me from office group took my feelings to toss...
I felt bad not because I wasn't valued in front of my peers
But expected an acknowledgement for being with her for so many years..
My innocence was my expression of feeling
Even after conveying,my mind was not healing
I transferred her this burden of guilt
Although my feeling was pure and innocent...
She must have felt
What I meant
This day she calls me in pantry
To share with me her birthday pastry
I could have easily avoided her and said no
But earlier it was me who was desperate for my presence to show..
What goes around comes around
And if she is being nice,then I am too bound
I was guilty of making her feel sorry for me
I accepted her invite gracefully
I should have definitely missed to attend
However I had started ,so had to end..
At times I feel, I was yearning for her validation
But when it came true ,I revisited my manifestation
There is a fine line in being innocent and fool
Mostly I cross this line ,but it's cool..
Above instance was when I was in Audit beat
Then while I worked in tax and same thing repeat
But now I didn't feel the instance as bitter
As last experience helped me to handle this situation better
Why should I even bother this scene
Dwelling upon hurtful event only intensifies pain
Focus should be now to be productive and knowledge to gain
Some people we meet are chapter in book
Zoom out and preview they have an outlook
Instead of seeing it like she is removed and required no more
Why not look like welcoming from outside door
Turn this page on and see new chapter
All stories do end with happily ever after
Even if not we can make it with a smile
Forgetting the bad and stepping a mille
These petty things I cried over as if it was vital
With time these instances do look trivial
Penning down this instance of being innocently guilty I realise
As long as I don't repeat my mistake,I am wise!!!
©️ Priyanka Kamath ✍️
24 March 2025
Bio
Poetry is a way of expressing Priyanka's experience and stories.Life is a learning institution and sharing it in the form of write up is a healing process. She dedicates her work to her dear parents
Wednesday, 19 March 2025
147. shubh Vivah- Marriage
*Marriage *
For me my relatives meant only parents and brother
And special attention during my wedding seemed to bother
Because I knew this is just for today
But afterall it was my special day
The handful mehendi which would last Hardly for a week
But spent thousands for this and makeup streak
Smiling for pictures entire day on this feast
And a surprise stay in a hotel which I enjoyed the least
On one hand leaving parents home
On other adjustments with in-laws dome
Settling up in abroad and learning chores
Searching for job and enrolling in Exams course
Getting to know my spouse with time
And accepting him as mine
From being lazy at all task towards being pro
Handling house chores along with going office to and fro
The transition has been nicer
Going to job has made me wiser
Understanding self , spouse, work culture has been tough
There were times I was either vulnerable or rough
Although my mother-in law is good
I have at times misunderstood
But now I have made peace
And burden baggage left to release
Marriage also comes with a question about kid
And baby names in advance if it's alia or sid
I also have succumbed to society pressure
Couple with our age have one for sure
But now I am taking things easy
It's about doing duty nicely and being busy
Marriage is not just a licence to bear baby
It's also about mutual understanding and not being shabby
Things will fall in place at right time
And life looks better and fine
Just grateful to have a blessed married life
And having a loving husband and being his doting wife!!!
©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath
19 March 2025
Feedback
Splendid ❤️
A beautifully honest and relatable reflection on your journey through marriage , is commendable ❤️
Beautifully captured the whirlwind of emotions, from the initial discomfort with wedding fanfare to the gradual process of building a life and understanding with your spouse and in-laws. The equations of relationships over time have been beautifully explained through a beautiful flow of words and emotions.❤️
Keep writing – your ability to articulate these personal experiences is truly engaging❤️
Tuesday, 18 March 2025
146.Palace built on ruins
Palace built on ruins
Money can't buy class
But my experience is trying alas!
The ruins had part of greed
To detach from it I agreed
I used to not spend my money for luxurious live
And when I get any opportunity I wouldnt leave
Example I love cake, but I wouldnt buy
If someone treats ,to have it all I wouldn't shy
Even after I started to earn
There are many things in me to learn
Slowly I am in learning process
On corporate grooming afresh
This includes making my self esteem strong
My mistakes include grabbing chocolates from my peers seat which is wrong
In an event ,I happen to eat the biggest cake piece share
resulting in having nothing left for peer
I have also taken food of someone's share
And then gave it back when I realised on my part it was not fair
These were the bare basics I was taught
As I forgotten them, my self respect struggled a lot
If someone tries to point out my error in nutshell
I have cried over and intended to take it personal
Also I have done things drawn in pleasure
God has been great in preserving my respect treasure
All this has been the reason of my ruined base
But God has been kind to give me chance always
I am rebuilding my palace with strong root
Putting my efforts and not thinking of ultimate fruit
These experiences are like the paints of my wall
Different shades of vibrant color with grey waterfall
I gathered courage to put the first building stone
To take the feedback positive alone
Actions should speak louder than words beautiful
Journalling my true emotions is healing and Impactful
It takes courage to self reflect on the most embarrassing things I have done
And sharing through poems as I dare to express towards none
I am building my palace again being sincere and honest
It can be in a tall space or even size of nest .
As long as the base
is strong
it can sustain long !!!
©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath
18 March 2025
Review
Your poem is a raw, introspective and deeply honest reflection on personal growth, self awareness and transformation. It beautifully captures the essence of learning from past mistakes, rebuilding with sincerity and striking for a stronger foundation. It is deep making powerful. Acknowledging both past mistakes and the effort to improve creates an inspiring narrative. It beautifully depicts both the high and lows of life. Your poem is beautiful testament to personal evolution and honesty in your writing makes it incredibly relatable. ❤️❤️
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Friday, 14 March 2025
144. Feminine vibes (for E magazine)
Feminine vibes
Nature when is sensitive to any tone
Leads to walking in emotional zone
when I feel vulnerable it's ok to shed tear
But someone taking advantage of my sensitivity is the fear
Feminine energy includes the calm radiance of moon
Dealing each situation with Wit is a boon
An example I am quoting now is open ended story
Not sure if I did right or have to be sorry
I was walking towards metro this day
And passing over a zebra crossing way
A person in white car purposely didn't stop which seemed odd
Came across my way and didn't move between road
I felt weird that my presence was not acknowledged
I was half way through road,but parked car in between road full fledged
He seemed to find pride in blocking my way
I just patted my tiffin bag on the back of his car as I walked past this play
His ego was hurt that how could I touch his car
I kept walking and came so far
Now he comes out of the car and starts calling from behind
'Hello Hello' ,I heard but I didn't turn back purposely his side
My tiffin patting his car was a deliberate act
It didn't damage his car in any way for the fact
But his ego was hurt and now he could stop the car,walk all way just to fight
Seeing this effort to argue with me was kind of delight
When I wanted to cross he didn't care
And me ignoring his' Hello hello' kinda seemed fair
When it comes to fight I can also raise my voice in synergy
But feminine power in me signed to preserve my energy
I wanted to make him feel what I felt
Not sure if this was the right way I dealt
Possibly ignoring was also a better way
Which I follow on basis all day
But it's ok to test self at time
Sometimes I lose otherwise I shine
My feminine energy just whispered one thing
Do what makes you reduce overthinking
Matter is done and dusted double
Next time I should be mindful to not put self in trouble
But the sixth sense to see a person by a glance cover
And understand the intention is indeed a feminine power !!!
@✍️ Priyanka Kamath
7 March 2025
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The complexities of feminine energy are impressively portrayed, striking a balance between vulnerability and quiet strength. The emotional sensitivity associated with femininity is established, while the fear of exploitation is also highlighted. The confrontation with the driver is a powerful depiction of this balance. The conscious decision to conserve one’s energy and maintain one’s composure is also shown as well as the desperation. The simple language and straightforward story, is commendable ❤️
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