Both these frames are mine
My personality of dusk and sunshine
I am a tension master
So mostly my face frowns faster
However learning to adjust my settings of life shelf
To smile more and believe in myself!!
©️ Priyanka Kamath ✍️
Instagram -priyankakamath7
31 May 2024
My guilt is making opposite person feel faulty
To potray I am innocent and she is guilty..
The previous department I worked was now toxic
It was best time for me to leave than feel sick..
But this decision was made not by me, but my boss
And her removing me from office group took my feelings to toss...
I felt bad not because I wasn't valued in front of my peers
But expected an acknowledgement for being with her for so many years..
My innocence was my expression of feeling
Even after conveying,my mind was not healing..
I transferred her this burden of guilt
Although my feeling was pure and innocent...
She must have felt
What I meant
This day she calls me in pantry
To share with me her birthday pastry
I could have easily avoided her and said no
But earlier it was me who was desperate for my presence to show..
What goes around comes around
And if she is being nice,then I am too bound
I was guilty of making her feel sorry for me
I accepted her invite gracefully
I should have definitely missed to attend
However I had started ,so had to end..
At times I feel, I was yearning for her validation
But when it came true ,I revisited my manifestation
There is a fine line in being innocent and fool
Mostly I cross this line ,but it's cool..
Penning down this instance of being innocently guilty I realise
As long as I don't repeat my mistake,I am wise!!!
©️ Priyanka Kamath ✍️
29 May 2024
Review-
Exquisite ❤️
The internal struggle with feelings of inadequacy and the external consequences of a toxic work environment are beautifully highlighted. The composition is beautifully narrated based on the introspective journey, lessons learned from experiences and the importance of self-awareness and growth. Personal accountability and the ability to gain wisdom by learning from mistakes inspires one to seek insights in dealing with complex relationships and challenging situations❤️
Keep it up ❤️
@Priyanka Kamath
You are a fictional character, for many…
But for me, you are the very flesh and bone
Who is lively, intelligent, creative, humorous, smart and a damn kind hearted soul…
The very vibe and tribe, for me!!!
Meeting you, was either universe, plan, or sheer luck, or turn of events…
But I consider, myself, worthy, who got , the very privilege of knowing you…
Connect or disconnect, your existence, and aura, would always be there…
All in all, you have your own world, to take care of, and I respect and admire that.
Being in your company, itself, is the , biggest feel, for me…
A different level of happiness, and peace, surrounds me, that’s the kind of infinite impact…
You are Genuine
You are Pure
You are true
Never more…never less…
Off all I wish, that , Almighty, always blesses you, with fortune, happiness and all your dreams come true!!!
My life…My tunes…
I would wake up one day…
And everything will be happening on my own will…
I would be , writing my own destiny…
I will be knowing all the coming moments…
Coming instances…coming days…
The coin would flip…
And be heads or tales…
Circumstances will always be in my stride…
Obstacles I would face, yet I would completely know, how to go about them…in the first go itself…
Many would be hits…
The idea of miss…would be negated…
Live life on my own terms…
Won’t be a mere statement…
I would actually be doing…
Everything on my own whims and fancies…
My destiny…would be written by each golden engraverd word…
Where all dreams would come true…
I would do good, for whom so ever I want…
No limitations…no unnecessary thoughts…
Clear thoughts…strong will…
That’s how my self written destiny would go….
A Birthday Poem
Girl in a birthday hat,
Of a kind and beautiful heart,
Of a love bigger
than the ocean,
Of a smile brighter
than the morning sun,
And of a beauty
as mesmerizing as the heavenly stars,
Happy birthday to you.
Written by Sky
Feb 2024
Life breathed through me like a wild wind,
The last time I felt truly free.
Unbridled joy, untamed and unconfined,
My spirit soared, wild and carefree.
In that moment, I was one with the air,
My heart beating in rhythm with nature's care.
No bounds, no chains, no weights to bear,
Just the thrill of living, without a single care.
The world was vibrant, colors alive,
Sounds resonating, like a symphony inside.
Every breath, a dance, every step, a stride,
Freedom's exhilaration, my soul could not hide.
But like the wind, it passed me by,
Leaving memories, and a longing sigh.
For that feeling, that wild, free cry,
Echoes within, until I touch the sky.
Yet, in remembrance, I find my way,
To recapture that freedom, every day.
To let life breathe through me, wild and free,
And feel the rush of living, full and Entire
Only for you
Priyanka
Love undefined…
Love, a feeling that can't be tamed
A force that's fierce, yet gentle as a flame
It burns within us, a fire so bright
A guiding light, that shines through the night
It's the whispered words, in a lover's ear
The tender touch, that calms all fear
The laughter shared, the tears that dry
The memories made, that never die
But what is love, that it can't be defined?
A mix of emotions, that forever entwine
A bond between souls, that transcends time and space
A connection deep, that leaves a lasting trace
It's the smile of a child, the hug of a friend
The comfort of home, where love never ends
The warmth of a embrace, that chases away the cold
The feeling of belonging, that never grows old
Love undefined, yet felt so true
A mystery that's lived, by me and you
A journey of the heart, that we all must take
A path that's winding, with moments that were always their
"Shadows Within"
Trapped in a cage, of love turned cold
A prisoner of pain, with heart grown old
The chains that bind, are made of fear
A suffocating grip, that brings only tears
Your touch, once gentle, now a threat
A whispered promise, of hurt and defeat
Your eyes, once bright, now dark and cold
A reflection of the soul, that's grown old
The words you speak, a poisonous sting
A venom that spreads, and makes my heart sing
A melancholy tune, of sorrow and shame
A symphony of pain, that's forever the same
I search for escape, from this endless night
A beacon of hope, to guide me to the light
But your grasp is tight, your hold is strong
And I'm lost in darkness, where I don't belong
"Fateful Voyage"
Upon the ship of dreams, they met by chance
Two souls from different worlds, in a tragic dance
Jack's heart afire, with passion's flame
Rose's eyes, like sapphires, shone with noble name
In stern's stern gaze, their love did unfold
A forbidden tale, of hearts young and bold
Their whispers sweet, in secret rendezvous
Stolen moments, amidst life's precarious cruise
The ship's grand stair, witnessed their first kiss
As fate's dark shadow, began to dismiss
Their love's brief spark, like shooting star
Flashed bright, then vanished, near and far
The iceberg's chill, struck with deadly aim
Their love's fragile boat, against life's raging stream
Jack's sacrifice, in icy waters cold
Rose's promise, to never let go, to hold
"Shadows' Refuge"
In twilight's hush, where darkness reigns
A paradise of shadows, soothes my pains
The world's loud din, fades into night
As I find solace, in this peaceful sight
The stars above, a twinkling sea
Reflect the dreams, that only darkness can free
The moon's pale glow, illuminates my soul
In this dark haven, I am made whole
The silence whispers, secrets in my ear
Of mysteries hidden, from the light of day's fear
The shadows dance, upon the wall
A macabre waltz, that beckons me to fall
In this dark paradise, I find my home
A refuge from the world's harsh tone
A place to hide, from prying eyes
Where my heart's shadows, can quietly disappear
_"Unbroken Spirit"_
When darkness falls and fears arise
Stay strong, dear heart, and open your eyes
The night may seem long, but dawn is near
And with each step forward, your strength will appear
Don't let the shadows whisper lies
You are brave, you are fierce, you are alive
Your heart beats strong, your soul shines bright
You've survived every stormy night
When doubts creep in and worries roam
Remember your worth, your heart, your home
You are a warrior, a fighter, a star
Your spirit unbroken, near and far
So hold on to hope, don't let go
Stay strong, dear heart, and watch your spirit glow.
For you Priyanka
That it would not let her float
With wind that boat immersed in sea
And the darkness didn't let her see
She has the swimming ability
Which let her survive overnight in the sea
She was tired and seemed no more strong
The dark night seemed way too long
As the sun rises she gets back some hope
She decides to swim towards it and cope
Lessons she took from this situation
That life is not fair session
Just like she believed in the boat much
Reality no one is permanent as such
Her ability to swim sustained her to survive
She understands to build skills,always one must strive
She earlier felt the night was too long a mess
But she also learnt there is always a Morning after all darkness
She felt there was no more hope left
But as sun rose her clarity of thoughts makes this shift
She is more hopeful for her life to start again
She should swim to reach as " no pain , no gain "!!!
©️ Priyanka Kamath ✍️
25 May 2024
When she joined this new team
She had so many happy dream
And today was her last day with this troop
And her manager just removes her from group
Even when someone joins for short term
Their exit is valued in the firm
So it pinched her a bit
Expresses this to manager as she deems fit
And just for the sake of it
She gets what she asked for ,that's it
There was no gain
She ended up feeling lame
At the heat of the moment she felt the need of this validation
She is aware that life is not a dictation
Whatever happened is done and dusted
More she think, she be like a iron rusted
She is into a fresh team
Why should she even bother this scene
Dwelling upon hurtful event only intensifies pain
Focus should be now to be productive and knowledge to gain
Some people we meet are chapter in book
Zoom out and preview they have an outlook
Instead of seeing it like she is removed and required no more
Why not look like welcoming from outside door
Turn this page on and see new chapter
All stories do end with happily ever after
Even if not we can make it with a smile
Forgetting the bad and stepping a mile!
©️ Priyanka Kamath ✍️
24 May 2024
Participated in anthology named Separation with some modification as follows:
When she joined this new team
she had so many happy dream
And today was her last day with this troop
and her manager just removes her from group
Even when someone joins for short term
their exit is valued in the firm
So it pinched her a bit
expresses this to manager as she deems fit
And just for the sake of it
She gets what she asked for ,that's it
There was no gain
she ended up feeling lame
At the heat of the moment she felt the need of this validation
she is aware that life is not a dictation
Whatever happened is done and dusted
more she think, she be like a iron rusted
She is into a fresh team
Why should she even bother this scene
Dwelling upon hurtful event only intensifies pain
focus should be now to be productive and knowledge to gain
Some people we meet are chapter in book
zoom out and preview they have an outlook
Instead of seeing it like she is separated from team but ensure
to view new perspective "welcoming from outside door"
Turn this page on and see new chapter
all stories do end with happily ever after
Even if not we can make it with a smile
forgetting the bad and stepping a mile
Separation is just a bend
and not always an end!!
©️ Priyanka Kamath ✍️
Review
Marvellous ❤️
The importance of resilience, positivity and personal growth in the face of adversity was brilliantly highlighted. It also emphasised the role of effective leadership in fostering a positive team environment and supporting individual growth. The focus on personal growth, learning, and moving forward is commendable❤️
Keep it up ❤️
Thanks for sharing ❤️
@Priyanka Kamath
Monsoon in UAE is generally rare
But it had it's thunder lightning share
Well structured building looks breathtakingly beautiful
More artificial plants and less real ones are not cool
This year the vagaries in monsoon sustained over a week
And cloud seeding was done at its peak
Here the drainage system is also not that great
The city in level below water was its fate
There are tall buildings so many here
But less provision for unforeseen climate to bear
The heat of the sun during the day is generally very strong
More than heat it's the humidity that stays for long
Animals and birds are not seen in great numbers anymore
Trees are less and buildings are more
This is not restricted to country few
Saving our planet Earth should be our ultimate motive
We need to contribute to Sustainability
Volunteering to any such cause with our full ability
Environment conservation, it's awareness to be propagated more
Prevention is better than cure !!!
©️ Priyanka Kamath ✍️
20 May 2024
https://youngmindspublication.com/environment/
When time is unfavorable ,
try to keep mind positive & stable ..
Let hope be alive ,
and faith in God live ..
With prayers , magic do witness,
time heals & reflects wellness..
©️ Priyanka Kamath ✍️
20 May 2024
Modified this quote for an Anthology - separation
Separation is painful & unfavorable ,
try to keep mind positive & stable .
Divert your mind towards positive living and fitness
time heals & reflects wellness..
©️ Priyanka Kamath ✍️
'Platonic relationship' was always she yearned
This is a new term this day she learned
She has experienced there is a fine line
Between opposite gender that tend to cross with time
Sometimes it's her who needs emotional support dual
Any relationship should always be mutual
There are instances in her life where she has sought that feel
Just the zeal to uncover emotions like onion layers peel
However mostly it's her who is in the receiving end
So one sided need wouldn't last long but takes a bend
She definitely has some strong support emotional stage
She is looking for a Platonic relationship which doesn't with time age
This is how she is making her profile
She is fine to have one even if opposite person is far in mile
Age,marital status and gender can be any
She has emotions to share too many
She also needs to be at the giving end
Be it listening patiently and friendly hugs she can send
She likes to have a pen friend
Emotions in form of letters she can lend
If you want to reach out to her in any form
Email her your profile @xyz.com
Waiting this alliance to be fix
To start a journey of platonic mix !!!
✍️ Priyanka Kamath
19 May 2024
Feedback
Marvellous ❤️
I appreciate the way you described your thoughts on a given topic with a twist❤️
Your views on platonic relationships are brilliantly portrayed and give beautiful insight on the topic given your approach to receiving emotional support through interpersonal and non-physical relationships. It reflects a genuine desire for authentic emotional intimacy that transcends traditional boundaries❤️
Thanks for sharing ❤️
Keep inking
Keep inspiring ❤️
@Priyanka Kamath
Late Smt. Gomati P Kamath
(18 th May 1960 )
You are my sunshine
You would be 64 this time
I wish I had a time machine
To bring you back fine
Each time I pen down
Tears just roll down
Every time I feel your charming smile
It gives me courage to walk another mile
My each emotions you were aware
Each day I would heartily share
I have your voice notes at length
I cry each time I hear,but it gives me strength
I keep collecting your things now
But all I need is you Amma ,my love
Whatever phases you may have seen
Always positive pure soul you been
We surely have a connection deep
I hope you wake up from your deep sleep
Hug me and tell me that I was just seeing a bad dream
You are still here with me and let's celebrate today with a ice cream
Even when I grow older
I wish I could have your shoulder
We have made so many memories together
I am blessed to be your daughter my dear mother
You are celebrating your Birthday in heaven king sized
I will follow your way of life and be more organised
You are pain free and in peace sure
Happy Birthday gondi ,I miss you more!!
!
✍️ Priyanka Kamath
18may 2024
Review
[18/05, 12:47 pm] Sheryl Kamath: A beautiful poem with sentiments from deep within your heart which speaks of a truly special bond, deep love and sorrow of missing her. She lives in you - just look in the mirror and be comforted that you will never be separated from her in spirit!
[18/05, 12:50 pm] Sheryl Kamath: Your mum sounds like a truly precious and beautiful, loving person. Let that bring you comfort too. Some of us are blessed with a pure love, like yours with your mum, mine with my dad. Although they are out of sight, they will live on in our heart!
God bless and don’t be sad
She ticked the wish list for an adventurous day
And decided to explore public transport her own way
New in county , too innocent with no net pack
To have basic transport card, knowledge she lack
She was visiting her first office first time
And she was already late and still she seems to be fine
As she stood tall in amidst the bus stop
She was offered lift too by a cop
When one bus arrives ,she was unsure to get in
A young man who learned her destination nodded to fit in
Now the bus was taking another route
And she wanted to fight with this man and turn him mute
But man said that this was the right bus and he could assist
Serendipity of events were such unreal mist
They spoke well and enjoyed the journey at hop
The pathway seemed more interesting than the ultimate stop
He helped her reach metro Safe
But had clarity of thought not be friends in any case
For sure the event was adventurous though a bit risky and foolish
Serendipi-city....to self explore was one to cherish !!!
✍️ Priyanka Kamath
16 May 2024
*Bygone Era*
She has done many awkward stuff with no wrong intention
Bygone era has been a bag of mix emotions
Below story of this lady,let's cease
As she goes for her first day in office
She ticked the wish list for an adventurous day
And decided to explore public transport her own way
New in county , too innocent with no net pack for
To have basic transport card, knowledge she lack
She was visiting her first office first time
And she was already late and still she seems to be fine
As she stood tall in amidst the bus stop
She was offered lift too by a cop
When one bus arrives ,she was unsure to get in
A young man who learned her destination nodded to fit in
Now the bus was taking another route
And she wanted to fight with this man and turn him mute
But man said that this was the right bus and he could assist
Serendipity of events were such unreal mist
They spoke well and enjoyed the journey at hop
The pathway seemed more interesting than the ultimate stop
He helped her reach metro Safe
But had clarity of thought not be friends in any case
For sure the event was adventurous though a bit risky and foolish
A bygone era to self explore and to cherish !!!
✍️ Priyanka Kamath
6 Jan 2025
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Beautiful, your poem "Bygone Era" captures a personal journey of growth, exploration, and the lessons learned through an adventurous yet risky experience. It creates a sense of nostalgia for simpler times, where innocence and impulsiveness often led to unexpected but memorable encounters. Keep capturing through writing. ❤️❤️
*Base of GSB Konkani randap*:
1. *Sukke*- Sukkein in Konkani means dry. It is a dry preparation which makes use of coconut, roasted red chillies, tamarind and urad dal roasted in a little oil and ground to a coarse paste. Seasoned with mustard, or mustard n curry leaves.
2. *Sagle*- Sagle in Konkani literally means whole. That means dt the vegetable is kept intact with a couple of slits and without chopping into fine pieces. Coconut, roasted red chillies, tamarind and roasted coriander seeds and methi seeds are ground together to a coarse paste. The masala is medium spicy. The seasoning is of mustard, or mustard n curry leaves in coconut oil.
3. *Ghashi* - It is usually a gravy of coconut, roasted red chillies and tamarind ground to a smooth paste. Again this too is not very spicy and seasoned in coconut oil with mustard n curry leaves. Generally pulses like moong, toor and chana are used to make ghashi. Another method of making ghashi is by coarsely grinding teppal/ Triphal with the masala and drizzling coconut oil after boiling the ghashi. Jen avro/ kutch Val, tingalavro / navy beans or even Alsandya bee/ black eyed beans / chawli are used.
4. *Koddel*- a spicy preparation of coconut, roasted red chillies and tamarind. The quantity of coconut used is less in comparison to ghashi, sukkein or Sagle. The masala is ground to a smooth paste and it is seasoned with lots of garlic in coconut oil. Koddel could be of fresh vegetables like magge or Mangalore cucumber, raw banana or of Kulith/ horse gram or Alsandya bee/ black eyed beans or chawli.
6. *Humman*- a spicy gravy of coconut, roasted red chillies and tamarind ground to a fine paste and which has to be boiled well. Drizzled with fresh coconut oil n asafoetida. ( hinga uddak) It is not seasoned. Once the oil n asafoetida water is drizzled it is kept tightly covered so that the masala gets infused. Potato and double beans are generally used to make humman.
7. *Bendhi* - this is a spicy gravy ground fine with less of coconut and more of roasted red chillies and tamarind. Seasoning of lot of garlic in coconut oil. Bendhi is generally made with pulses like black toor/kali tori, tingalavro /navy beans.
8. *Ambatta*- ambat can be made with or without the addition of cooked toor dal to the masala. Coconut, roasted red chillies and tamarind is ground together to a smooth paste and any chopped vegetable of your choice can be used. It is seasoned with onions in coconut oil. Peas, cauliflower, ivy gourd/tendle or even onion is used as the vegetable of choice.
9. *Bhuthi*- This is a preparation where onions are used in the seasoning along with mustard. Masala again is of coconut, roasted red chillies and tamarind ground to a coarse paste. Usually bhuthi is made with ivy gourd/tendle, jeev kadgi/ a variety of raw jackfruit or onions themselves used both in seasoning and as vegetable of choice.
10. *Tamballi*- this is a cold preparation. Coconut, roasted red chillies and tamarind are ground to a very smooth paste and chopped onions are added as garnish. Drizzled with coconut oil. This preparation is not heated and thus not prepared in advance.
11. *Bhaartha*- This too is a cold preparation where the ground masala of coconut, roasted red chillies, ginger and tamarind is not heated. The difference is in the addition of adding cooked and mashed vegetables like brinjal or ghosale/ ridge gourd to the masala and n raw onions are added as garnish n drizzled with coconut oil.
12. *Kismoori*- This used to be traditionally made with either fried bitter gourd/karathe or sooran/yam. But of late, beans, spring onions and even carrot is used, the first two being shallow fried and the last eaten raw. Kismoori is of two types. One is with grated coconut, green chillies and onions minced, salt and coconut oil. This is added to the fried karathe or sooran just before serving. Same is with the other vegetables too which need to be cooled before the garnish is added.
The second variety of Kismoori is coconut, roasted red chillies, ginger and tamarind ground to a coarse paste. Finely chopped onions salt and coconut oil are mixed with the masala and this again is added to the karathe/bitter gourd or sooran /yam just before serving.
🌹🌼☘️🌟💖💦🌹🌼☘️🌟💖💦🌹🌼☘️🌟
I feel heavenly peace when ..
Peace is often induced ink
We become what we think
When work done as per my list ✅
I pat on my back with victory fist
These little achievements get peace in me
But heavenly peace is attained when one day I would be free
I would meet back my mother in heaven at ease
That day I would attain heavenly peace
✍️ Priyanka Kamath
14 may 2024
Extempore - Topic online education -Boon / Bane
Secured First place conducted online on 5 may 2024
Also participated in Best out of waste Competition
A mid aged lady surrounded by chore
For all creatures,has a big heart and open door
A street cat was attached to this lady a lot
This young female kitten would soon conceive sure shot
Multiplication of kittens and arrangement for its feed
Finding a good home for them was her only need
Neighbours were not supportive to opt
As cat grew bigger , noone wished to adopt
Lady was detected with illness
And couldn't anymore take care of kittens wellness
One day she decides to leave this pussy in nearby market of fish
In anticipation that kitty would get to eat her favourite dish
She did get rid of the kitty
However later regretted and found pity
The next day she sees a lifeless kitten of colour same
She keeps weeping as letting the pussy die was never the aim
She makes her heart strong and goes to the same place
And slowly the kitty comes to her jumping with love and grace
This serendipity had so much to adore
That the lady shed tears of love pure
That how she had lost hope arch
Yet she had faith so went in same place to search
Cats are generally attached to home
However here for this pussy , the owner was well known
She was happy to learn that kitty was alive and aware of lady's health inputs
And was ready to adjust and stay wherever she was decided to put
Each day lady was getting weaker as she stood
She came to see the pussy whenever she could
She was so happy to see the kitten was well adapted and out of shell
Kitty earned her food and took care of herself well
The lady is in heaven blessing all her furry baby and real ones
Even her babies wish someday serendipity makes them meet her once
✍️ Priyanka Kamath
13 May 2024
Tragedy*
A mid aged lady surrounded by chore
For all creatures,has a big heart and open door
A street cat was attached to this lady a lot
This young female kitten would soon conceive sure shot
Multiplication of kittens and arrangement for its feed
Finding a good home for them was her only need
Neighbours were not supportive to opt
As cat grew bigger , noone wished to adopt
Lady was detected with illness
And couldn't anymore take care of kittens wellness
One day she decides to leave this kitty in nearby market of fish
In anticipation that little one would get to eat her favourite dish
She did get rid of the kitty
However later regretted and found pity
The next day she sees a lifeless kitten of colour same
She keeps weeping as letting the kitty die was never the aim
She makes her heart strong and goes to the same place
And slowly the kitty comes to her jumping with love and grace
This serendipity had so much to adore
That the lady shed tears of love pure
That how she had lost hope arch
Yet she had faith so went in same place to search
Cats are generally attached to home
However here for this kitty , the owner was well known
She was happy to learn that kitten was alive and aware of lady's health inputs
And was ready to adjust and stay wherever she was decided to put
Each day lady was getting weaker as she stood
She came to see the little angel whenever she could
She was so happy to see the kitten was well adapted and out of shell
Kitty earned her food and took care of herself well
Her kids wish is to get over the tragedy of her loss and meet her once
The lady is in heaven blessing all her furry baby and real ones!!!
✍️©️ Priyanka Kamath
06-10-2024
Review
Profound 🔥
Unconditional love is powerfully depicted through the bond between humans and animals, showcasing the enduring nature of this connection. This heartwarming story revolves around a middle-aged woman and her deep relationship with a stray cat, highlighting the themes of tragedy and hope. Despite facing numerous challenges, the woman's unwavering love and compassion for her feline companion shines through🔥
The narrative uses emotive language and beautiful imagery to illustrate the power of love and the enduring bond, which is commendable 🔥
Keep it up 🔥
@Priyanka Kamath CkS Writer
Artwork - moms craft / my write up with collage
Today's one liner is here👇
Ehsaas mere jaari hain, alfaaz se phir bhi khali hun.........
Complete the poetry
Jo meri rakshak bane uss vidhata se
Aatma se aabhari hoon!!
Heat of summer is a grace
As it's external in any case
But the challenge is dealing with internal battle
neither particular season can calm nor cooling bottle
I received a review at workplace that I am not social
But I find myself with smiling face ,short talks with all
It's true that I am moody and generally carried away by emotions
To be consistent I prefer to be constant unlike various season
I understood that enough opportunities were missed because I speak less
Public speaking is where I don't feel at stress
But that skill of open mic doesn't work in all case
When I feel too heated up, only warm water is my route
If consumed from fridge I will end up hurting my throat
Like warm water will keep me well irrespective of season
So I should find out a way to keep me cool for all right reason
When I got this feedback I was heated up within
And journaling my feeling was a coolant tin
I understand that just like everyone has different way to beat the heat
I should accept the feedbacks gracefully , and overcome all defeat!!!
✍️ Priyanka Kamath
8th May 2024
Feedback
Alluring❤️
Brilliantly portrayed your thoughts that summers are a blessing compared to dealing with the challenges of internal conflicts. Beautifully emphasised your point with examples .Ended with beautiful conclusion that everyone has different ways of dealing with their problems, and everyone should accept feedback with humility❤️
Keep penning
Keep rocking ❤️
@Priyanka Kamath
@Priyanka Kamath You have depicted your emotions compared to the heat of summer. Your personal feelings are genuine which you have gone through. You have made it a bit lengthy according to the lines limit asked. ❄ ❄ ❄ ❄
For her season is beyond the climate
In this school named life , she met a classmate
They shared the same stationary and bench
Shared laughter, aspirations and lunch
Attending class and Sharing smile
Although they were located away by miles
It was the First day of may , rainy and cool
When he decided to change the school
He would have new friends and story
Hope the friendship doesn't end up being just a memory
She kept writing him letter
But with technology emails seemed better
Certain memories are linked to season
When rain falls , she also feel teary eyed for other reason
The season changed so did the climate
And one day their path crossed fate
She missed those innocent warm letter tale
Just as letter writing was replaced by email
Now the connections meet up even with advanced technology fails
So she now knows that people too are like season and phase
She can't expect the same warmth as the very base
When they were younger they connected more
Now the priority is different at core
She likes to re- live those memories which brought the best in her
He motivated her to be a poet , writer and confident speaker
As they parted away she wanted a last hug with passion
He was a stranger now and left without expression
She doesn't know his side of story deep
She just realises that it's time to take a leap
She loved him but but realised late
Fresh season has opened her love gate
With changing season the memories peeled
She overcame her emotions and now has completely healed !!!
✍️ Priyanka kamath
1 st May 2024
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Wow
Seasonal change
Defined
With the very, changes in life
Very well done!!!
A very different write up
A different league
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That's good. Can write with deeper emotions.
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