Knowing that chances are given for mistakes again, raises tendency for taking granted 'Begin again '.
Malaysia had been in our bucket list keen
The country is beautiful and clean
Between Penang and Kuala Lumpur we divided our stay
To make it fruitful each day
Georgetown Penang is well known for its street Art
We did a walking tour of this cultural part
Street art has a different story to shine
In multiple poses, I could narrate one each time
Passing through Little India, China town and Food street
Clan of Jetties ,temple here is a visual retreat
Walking through Top of Penang tower beam
Beneath a glass counter is a sky walk theme
Sky Bridge is a outdoor building walk
We get to see Penang city to unlock
Rainbow walk podium had 4 things to check
There is a swing of Luck
A message to manifest and tuck
Top open space for sky walk
A bell to ring believed to wish lock
Observatory Deck was near to Sky walk space
To observe the view indoor at our pace
Aquarium was filled with variety of marine life pool
The environment was calm and cool
Jurassic park had 2 variations centre
One is research and other one is a live park to enter
The dinosaur is structured in such a way
As if it is moving and has something to say
I realise a lot of effort goes into this formation
Major role of technology and innovation
There were many Wax Statues as we passed by these gem
They posed with me as if I was special to them
Mirror never lies but it's just a praise
I saw myself in different forms in Mirror maze
Exploring night market was such a fun drive
Witnessing fireworks with cool breeze and waves that arrive
I am mesmerized by the impact of seeing beach
It deep drives and to my soul it reach
We tried different Malaysian food
First two days we felt it was good
Tried Nasi lemak ,char kuey teow
Mee curry to name a few
Public transport is good to carry
Travelled through bus ,train and ferry
Batu cave is breathtakingly beautiful call
Was in tears as soon as I spotted Lord Hanuman idol
Lord Murugans calm smile
As if he heard everything standing from a mile
The day we visited, it rained a bit
Peacock dance was a lit
I was eager to capture picture with monkey alone
He was keen on grabbing my phone
My heart skipped a beat in a row
As monkey raised his eye brows
Petronas Twin Tower is a tourist attraction core
With lighting it looked so beautiful much more
Seremban is a small city
Explored to get some candy and things petty
A week long trip was good by god's grace
To visit as a couple to this country and place
Understanding different culture and heritage
And to embrace the moment and let myself free from any baggage
People were helpful and kind
Malaysia is indeed a unwinding find!!!
©️ Priyanka kamath
15-11-2024
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A beautiful account of a delightful Malaysian adventure, full of cultural immersion, breathtaking fun and delicious food.❤️
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Sensitivity and creative with love in heap
Certificate and your surprises loop
motivates me to keep writing and take a leap
Platforms Consistency and sincere efforts is the key here
I can express my thoughts without any fear
I am blessed to be part of this ever since
It has brought in me a lot of confidence
This community is now more than a family
I thank the team for the efforts done joyfully
May you prosper and more lourels to come
Happy anniversary,you are awesome !!!
©️✍️ Priyanka kamath
31/10/2024
Festival like Diwali was a wishful call
Helping mom with delicacy and distribute to all
Lighting diyas, cleaning home, wishing relatives and friend
May continue now too but those days had a different trend
The most special thing was it was done with heart
And festive season connected two ppl miles apart
Peple used to visit houses to give handmade sweet
Slowly it turned to store bought treat
I was accepting all the changing phases of festival season
However 'Dil'is missing in Diwali for the the below reason
Back in mangalore my parents stay in a society lane
Last year losing my mom was such a pain
Dad was doing ok as he has health issues odd
And I was looking for a help to stay with him as I stay abroad
His health conditions wouldn't allow him to travel
And I was just waiting for my arrival
My dad had his food arranged deal
He felt weak but missed his meal
He fell near gate and hurt his bone
And some road labourer helped him get home
He called my bro who stays a bit far
I m glad he came on right time to attend dad's scar
As soon as he arrives at night
my neighbour Nayana sees this and switchs off doors and light
Due to body pain dad couldn't walk
Although bro had kept water nearby he couldn't take
Dad calls me and said that he is thirsty and needs water
I called my neighbours for help as a human and not merely as a daughter
Mrs. Lobo says she is going for mass so can't attend
My other neighbour Mrs.Mallya who otherwise used to sweets send
Says that to give water noone will come
Other neighbour Kini said he is at work and treated me as if I am troublesome
Dad's so called friend and relatives who came to each of our family function
To relish the food, get gossips but none were there to share my concern
Mrs.Lobo then sends her house help to give dad water
And then calls me over phone later
Mentions that for the favour that she has given broad
She wants me to repay it by giving her nephew a job abroad
Sometimes I feel ppl are less human as technology pace doubles
As noone wants to take any unnecessary troubles
Real help is to be selfless and be kind towards someone in need
This is what develops in good karmic seed
Wishing a blissful festival and Pouring my heart with you all
I believe god is holding my hands and will never let me fall
Thankfully a good arrangement for dad is made at place
Only prayers for this Diwali is for him to heal by God's grace !!
©️✍️Priyanka Kamath
29-10-2024
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Awesomely awesome🔥
Your heart-warming words paint a beautiful picture of the transformation of Diwali, highlighting how it was once a festival of warmth and true bonding, but has now lost some of its essence in the modern world.🔥
Personal experiences highlight the difference between the idealised image of Diwali and the reality of human apathy. Despite the apathy, acts of compassion are also highlighted.Your views on the changing nature of relationships and the impact of technology are insightful. Your prayers for your father's recovery reflect the true spirit of the festival - a time of hope, healing and the triumph of light over darkness.🔥
May your father recover completely, and may Diwali bring you peace, joy and a renewed faith in humanity.🔥
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@Priyanka Kamath
Shortly I will be moving to a team new
Today there was a samosa party as a ice breaker to know
Let me just put a background of my situation very
Me earlier working under audit , at present in tax and future with advisory
My future manager had spotted me in tears way back
When I was having a tough time with audit team pack
Today when we met he asked in front of all
That he had seen me crying standing tall
Immediately everyone focussed on me more
And it was embarrassing to the core
My present manager answered this dent
That it was past ,let's focus on present
Then the upcoming manager spoke normally with all of us
And everyone started back chatting without a fuss
Yet back of my mind I wanted to give him befitting reply
But the next few months to be trained at work, I would on him rely
If I give any negative vibe any
I can have tough time so many
I had female managers before
And they were kind and listened more
Now if I take up any issues more
I would be fired from job for sure
So being positive and learning work net
Doing my best and getting permanent
That's my focus
Yes I should not cry in office to avoid any buzz.
Anyways coming to my second part of pile
An issue over a smile
I smiled to my colleague and to smile back he didn't bother
I could have been silent but I spoke rather
He said he doesn't know me so he didn't smile sheer
So I said you aren't a hero , I smiled as a gesture as you are peer
He thought he was handsome that I couldn't resist but smile like this
Gave befitting reply to avoid wrong impression about this
Possibly I have a lot of baggage in my heart
Which is making me show naive and emotional part
I know I behave stupid at times
Yet good part is that I am journaling my feelings in this lines
Someday when I would look back
I would know if I have forgone this baggage pack
I am in such phase shatter
That I can cry even for tiny matter
I know this too shall pass sure
I should believe in myself a little more!!!
©️ ✍️Priyanka Kamath
25-10-2024
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Marvellous 🔥
A poignant moment of vulnerability and resilience is captured beautifully. The candid reflection on the emotional journey from past struggles to current challenges is presented, which is both relatable and inspiring. The contrast between the supportive and understanding current manager and the more indifferent future manager highlighted the complexities of workplace dynamics. The self-awareness of the emotional burden and the determination to overcome, is commendable . Empathy and understanding are portrayed brilliantly with raw honesty and introspective tone.🔥
Beautiful content 🔥
Keep it up 🔥
@Priyanka Kamath
There are 3 connections I see broad
With self , close relations and with God
Just like how phone charger is a must
for phone to access seamless list
I realised my connection to life's charger when it was lost
When I do my yoga, prayers ,meditation..
And work with full dedication ..
I feel happier,content and slay
This is how I charge my day
The moment I lean towards certain situation
And give lesser importance to self connection
I feel a drain in my energy magic ball
And without charger I exhaust them all
These lifestyle discipline which I refer to charger
Is to be daily connected to myself here
Just like how the phone gets dead
I shouldn't let my pure soul shed
Toxicity, negativity is easily found
But inner connection with self is a lifelong bond
With charger if misplaced we should trace it
With life our charger finds us but we should embrace it
I was recently coping up with some personal issue
Routine changed to crying and wiping off tears with tissue
But I forgot to charge myself, connect and bond
As a result I was aimlessly focussing on negativity around
The moment I gave away my worries to god
Started daily meditation and disciplined routine bond
I understood that my response to situation made it worse
I can overcome each test in life's phase
To overcome each test put by life with grace
Being dutiful and Staying connected to self is the base !!!
©️✍️Priyanka Kamath
22 October 2024
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Fantastic 🔥
Beautifully compared to a phone charger to illustrate the idea of the need for constant recharging in life. Emphasised the importance of connecting to oneself through practices such as yoga, meditation and mindful work, which is like a lifesaver and helps to deal with personal challenges and overcome negativity. Perfectly described the need for routine to maintain connection and energy. Showed faith in the process by showing dedication and belief in a higher power (God).🔥
Presented a beautiful and insightful reflection on the importance of connection and gave a beautiful message that staying connected to oneself can help us face life’s challenges more easily.🔥
Keep writing
Keep Inspiring🔥
@Priyanka Kamath
Term housewife has evolved over time
The essence of being a homemaker and outshine
I wonder if working in corporate would tag me as working lady to core
Considering I come back home and do my household chore
Just as when I do heavy lifting with all charm
I tend to push my capacity in my arm
After household work queue
I persue my hobby too
I make sure to write weekly one poem atleast
It really gives confidence in my fist
In addition when I give myself a chance to persue my studies more
It immensely gives me a life purpose for sure
I am aware if motherhood approaches me
My life would definitely turn 360 degree
I have seen and felt my mom strive hard for us
By god's grace ,I am all set to do my duty without fuss!!!
©️✍️ Priyanka Kamath
15 October 2024
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Wow🔥
An empowering perspective on the diverse roles and contributions of women. Challenging old stereotypes, it shows the strength, resilience and determination that defines the modern housewife.
Beautifully portrays the physical and mental labour involved in household chores, comparing them to "heavy lifting".🔥
Remembering your mother as a housewife and mother, you beautifully admitted that she was the inspiration for your journey🔥
Keep it upt
Thanks for sharing your beautiful thoughts🔥
@Priyanka Kamath
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